Good story so far bad that there is only 26 chapters so far (I need read more I'm hooked) but its updated regularly
writing style and pace of this novel is terrible.mc has no brain.we can't even say it is wish fulfilling type story.it felt like reading an essay instead of a story
Writing quality: I'd say it's pretty good, though it may be a bit unrefined and messy. The grammar is fine, with some occasional mistakes that get corrected almost immediately once pointed out. Stability of updating: More often than not, the author updates 2 chapters a day. Sometimes, there's only one chapter, and rarely, there's no chapter at all. When that happens, the author tries to compensate in the future. Emphasis on "tries".Story development: The story is kind of rushed but it's developing quite nicely. Uses clichés but I'd like to think the author uses it in a way that makes fun of or builds upon it, rather than just copying and pasting the cliché. Cons are that romance is kind of unrealistic, an indication that the author is inexperienced in that field. Character design: I like the characters. There are some that are black-and-white but there are hints that they'll get fleshed out in the future. Also WARNING this is a harem, but the girls exhibit different personality traits and are unique from each other. World background: This is the part where it's really just straight ripped off of other stories. Well, I can't say for certain since it's only in Chapter 39 and the world might get more interesting in the future, but so far it's bland and boring. Thanks for listening to my TEDTalk.
Why does the novel stop we need more author pls continue the novel here .we neeeeeed mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
its mid~ -lots of loveFailure Management Class.....................................
I'm very proud to officially join the shameless authors' club, and am very confident in my ability to one-up them all in that particular field.This book is based on reality, but it also isn't.Many artists don't exist there such as Ed Sheeran, Shawn Mendes, James Arthur, Bruno Mars, Dean Lewis... ahem, well a lot of them basically don't exist.Why you ask? Well, because I don't want my MC to be so shameless as to steal other people's work, so he'll be a lyrical genius instead.However, he unfortunately has a shameless creator like me who couldn't write lyrics if her life depended on it. Therefore I'll be the one to thicken my skin instead and turn all those songs into Jay's personal inspiration pool, so don't blame him, blame me! Thank you very much. *bows deeply* *swaggers out*
Hello from China. Here is something you should KNOW about the price. This novel is great, it is really great to see readers all over the world enjoying it. Each time I saw the comments from you, I can't help but have a smile on my face. Your reactions are similar to most Chinese readers, and it seems that people around the world do have many things in common. But!!!!! One thing surprise me is the price you guys paid. It cost 8 spirit stones, really? You know what, IT ONLY COSTS 0.8~1 SPIRIT STONES to unlock 1 chapter for RtW, in the Chinese version of Qidian. Details here. In the Chinese Qidian app, it cost 1 dollars to buy 600 Reading Points (RD). Each chapter cost 10~12 RD on average.And for you guys, it cost 1 dollars (converted to us dollar) to buy 50 SS. Each chapter cost 8~10 SS. So the Chinese version needs only around 0.8~1ss to unlock each ch. The extra charging fee should be given to the translator and the company, right? But you have the right to know the truth. Give me thumbs up and let others see this. I give 3/5 to let others notice me, in my heart it is 5/5, or 5000000/5.
Initial impression is that it reminds me of The Legendary Mechanic, only the reincarnated player is the summoned beast of an NPC instead of the NPC themselves. Hopefully this change means that there will be, comparatively, more character interaction and supported character growth instead of the MC being a lone wolf that everyone close to him is trying to catch up with and everyone on his level is trying to make use of him. I'm looking forward to seeing if it can live up to my expectations
You know, when you find a book that's only 3 chapters long, you'd expect it to be bad, right? That's the complete opposite with this one! I love how Bob has no idea what is going on at all, and the other potential main characters also seem unique. Keep on writing, author!
this is something that should have been picked..well its a great novel , it gets you all teary eyed and has such intense emotions that you will want to find out what happens next , how the mc is going to arrange the next funeral....it just gets you hooked and wanting for more.
Man… what even is this? It’s honestly really disappointing since I enjoyed the novel.Well, that is until the yuri came. The MC’s past lover apparently has a harem full of women, which ruined the entire novel for me.
The story is really good and it has a lot of potential to be one of the best novels that I have ever read. Hopefully the author start releasing more chapters.