The story is good and I would love to read more of it
Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel
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If you have an insane amount of dedication, free time, and willpower, then the advice given in the early chapters will be immensely helpful to you.If you strive to write a poorly written, generic Chinese cultivation novel of the sort, this guide is perfect for you.All in all, this has some decent advice on basic writing strategies that absolute beginners or bad writers may need to hear. It's clearly formed around the strategy of appealing to the masses with a formulaic, and generic story based around wish-fulfillment however. This guide is absolutely not for everyone, nor should it be taken as solid advice on writing a "good" story.There was an error in punctuation on the very first line of this book, not sentence, line. In a book made to teach people about writing...
absolutely emaculate it astonishing how amazing this story is in my opinion one of the best story I've seen so far and other than a few and minor Grammer mistakes I would say this is a great story well worth the read
It's an interesting piece but the character is fast growing.... it's good considering it's a space based story but a few details doesn't hurt
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I lIke it, im intrested in what your going to when the season ends Also is the virus glong to spread around the world??
Wooow! I love the idea of the story, especially its Sci-fi. I love the character's development, the storyline is perfect. Job well done, Author.
nice story everything as of now is good really enjoying just hope author doesnt abondon the story in between
if you bad at comedy dont write a story bout comedy, this book bcome tottal garbage since elder jing arc, you may think its funny but reader think its just a retard