I like it so far the story is a bit simple but has promise for a much more complex storyline. Good work, Author. Give it a try you won't regret it.
Good ol' Mary Sue syndrome compounded by plot armor. There are many grammatical errors and inconsistencies, like how he has 100 bullets for his revolver in one chapter then 200 a few chapters later. There are better apocalypse novels out there.
Interesting plotline. The sypnosis and title page are very intriguing. Character design is unique as well. Though there's a few misplaced punctuations and spaces here and there, they're nothing major. The world the author built was so compelling that the reader kept wanting more. A nice work, overall. Keep it up!
I'm very satisfied with the overall story. The pair is chaotic and the interaction is good. Applaud. I really love every bit of it. it's nice and simple. Easy to read. Keep it up, author-nim. ???
One word: Awesome. The writing style, plot, grammer, vocab. Everything is phenomenal. Keep it up, I can't wait for more. You're really talented.
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