It’s been updated
just shows you like the "young master: grovel before me or die" type of abomination.
every good read needs to build upon something.
the novel is perfect now go and read this. periodt.
Giving out an actual review : about half of the novel is good ,but the other half is kind of trashy . It's a novel about superpowers and stuff, but the author tries REALLY hard to dampen people's enthusiasm, because about HALF of the chapters are the worst kind of slice-of-life with absolutely no point to them, like 2 chapters about EATING A CAKE and 2 previous chapters about COOKING THE CAKE WITH THE ORPHANS . Things like that will keep popping up . The other big issue with the novel is the LOW-KEY PROTAGONIST . The novel starts great, but after the first volume you can SEE the mood shift from the author . The best example for this transition from gold to trash is that in the (second I think)second volume, Yuna tells the butcher girl about her Teleport Gates without any problems, but by the 10th volume, the author conjures "contract magic" with death penalty clauses out of nowhere so that the protagonist can tell a few elves about the same Teleport Gates.A bunch of "low-key" nonsense
Kept on screaming in pain for 10mins after first waking up. Cmon. Drama queen much? And NOBODY COMES even tho he’s in the Duchess’s mansion. Seriously?
HOLD ONIs it really The End?The series finally ends?
This novel is one of the most xenophobic Novel I've ever read and I've read countless racist novel this one really takes the cake.
"You cheap lady! Die!" haha this translator is a joke
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This is a piece of shit, a typically trash teen-fic, write by a noob teen with not enough life experience and writing skills. The most deficient element is the pacing, pacing about what? I don’t know, because there isn’t any proper thing like a story to begin with. Events, dialogs and narratives have never been so fucked-up along with the full-of-hole timeline and plot. This is a worthless time-consuming effort that even can make seclude reader like me to emerge and bash a whole paragraph.
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here,
A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.