extremely good content and more interesting?????keep writing such good stories...???hope your upcoming writting will be interesting too as always you do... all the best?☮️
hi this book is great I love most of it so yeah I love some of the some they add in to the book ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?is amazing ? ? ?
Everything except the writing stability is pretty good. Of course, This isn't everybody's cup of tea, it is light-hearted,funny and has an overpowered character making for a laid back novel.Not everybody will like this, But this is just my kind of novel!
this isint an original novel and it costs gems to read despite using other games and entertainment this is not an original and theyre making money out of it i want them to copyright this so bad, The idea is also similar to "only i know the plot"
I've been reading this for a week now and I've enjoyed it thoroughly! And I'm not even an LoL player! The characters are well thought out, the transitions are good, it's a great novel overall.
Aaahh, finaly, i think this novel, Daedalus, and The Mech Touch are what makes Webnovel original novels the best new writer ones out there in the internet, there has been some jewels on RRL, but now it's time has passed, and there this new generation writers that are so amazing. Allright here's come my review.First off right on the bat, we get a nice prologue setup, that get us into the mood wanting to know more. The characters are getting fleshed out, somes not that much, it's the beginning of the novel, and there's tons of new characters, but what is really nice here, is you won't get one dimensional people in any point of the story. And that is great, there's tons of leads for many possible "main plots/sublots?".Well there's room for many things amazing things, as said, there's second role characters or even tird wheels, that feels like they want to "breaths" more into this story, giving it even mroe depths than it has at the moment.This leads to a conclusion where you got a badass MC, that use it's heads to use what he gots efficiently, without being a pushover nor a big studs rampaging everywhere, plus we got hints that his top aint it in the Universe, so as i said, it leads to a lot of promising futures.Dig into it! You won't be disapointed! Ah! and the Author is jsut so dedicated to this sotry, he works from 5 to 6, got family life with a new baby, writing this novel from 8 to 12pm, i mean come on, theres a patreon up, we all can share some loves to him as he does to us. BIG UP!
I have nothing but the highest admiration for this novel. It does so much right, has interesting characters, a well-realized and fantastic world, and an intriguing plot to boot. All without wearing out its' welcome like so many other series do. Its like whenever think you think everything's gonna be ok, something comes along and unexpected things happen.Did I mention the epic characters? "The King" and Mr "Speechless" are some of the most interesting and awesome characters I've ever read. Only Li Qiye from Emperor's Dominion could compare to their epicness!Thanks to the translators for bringing us this series. It was a blast to read!
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started reading when there were only 30 chapters out... excited to see what happens next. I hope you keep this going!
It’s still to soon to truly judge this but what makes people angry is that we don’t know what type of story this is! Or what’s it about?! Cultivation? Horror? Post-apocalyptic? We don’t know anything despite a lot of chapters passing. Rarely interaction with characters, I love solo MCs but when you introduce characters that are close to MC, then you should show them, I’m relieved Chiba getting attention for now but it can change, who knows? Also the short chapters and cliffhangers, are not helping as it’s dragging a lot sadly. If he gets with the best girl, I think this’ll be worth reading. But I can’t trust CNs =/
This is some sad, bad, horrible story with boring and horrible Characters.Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!Please bring back Pursuing Immortality!
When I first started reading this, it was exciting and had my full attention. The premise was good, the story started out well, and the character was somewhat interesting. Now the MC has turned into the biggest hypocrite, doesn't follow his own beliefs, and is probably a psychopath. The author has repeatedly written this and that about the beliefs the character follow.....then throws it out the window.The author seems to want to write 3 books in one and it's all over the place with no real consistency. It has turned into a wish fulfillment story. I would say read the first 40 or so chapters then drop.