Love the story and the characters. I almost didn't read due to a lack of rating. I am reviewing to hopefully get a rating for the the story and draw in more readers.
I dropped this novel, the story have a good premise, but the way the author writhes makes me puke blood. The POV change so much that i want to punch the screen and with the number of flashbacks combined you could write another book. Every chapter there is a change is the pov that totaly breaks the flow of the story. The protagonist is the self-image of every tenage shonen manga protagonist and his sister is anoying as well. Good luck with the novel and hope you improve your skills ?
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If there is a system the host should be in control NOT THE SYSTEM he should be op but no he is fully controlled by that god dam it. Im so mad that i dont want to call IT by its name
This book it’s pretty good I like the cultivation and how the mc is part beast which makes it even more ineteresting I have been looking for novels with systems and fantasy worlds like this
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Holy **** dude can you fking explain anything????? Like wtf is happening in this goddamn world? Too confusing but it had potential... truly a pity since the author is obviously inexperienced and getting criticized, but he handled it pretty well by rewriting the chapters, but it still doesn’t make any sense
as of chapter 15 this is really good ,the writing quality and overall storytelling is definitely 5 stars worthyin the first 2/3 chapters the mc might seem annoying but his character gets better further on especially in the latest chapters.as for world building? though the main plot is currently focused on 1 planet the world portrayed in this novel is very huge ,multiversel level huge I only hope the author can write upto that point and doesn't drop
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Assss.yeah that’s what eyewiwoeoeo said she is going to be in the car ? she is basically a kid and she is a cop and she is so basically she is a victim of
Love this novel. Good story with a unique plot. It adds a twist to the apocalypse genre of novels. The characters aren’t boring to read and that’s all. Now enjoy my poem.Roses are red.Violets are blue.Clovers are green.White clouds are—white.And the sun—it’s beautiful. Oh I messed up.And the sun—it’s yellow. Orange. Red. What color is the sun?FUUUUCCCCCKKKK