Its an interesting premise and I like the characters different emotional perspectives. Though there are a fee grammatical errors, it doesn't confuse the reader. I wish you the best on your book Author ?
Definitely another hidden gem. This novel is beyond flawless and contains a very commendable writing style. The author's wording is incredibly poetic but not difficult to understand. The transitions at times are a bit confusing but it got clearer the more I read when I got to understand the flow. The novel overall is worth the time to read ?
Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
This book is highly annoying. MC acts like he’s twelve years old, but the author pretends he’s mature and steady and an ex-special forces member.So far, characters are typical and exceedingly one dimensional, the battles are boring, and the whole thing just feels like a generic cut and paste xianxia. Can not recommend.
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Some sentence have grammar mistake and wrong wording use. Still is is pretty readableHaving 2 types of power base : cultivators and magic is good as it make it easier for readers to remember them. All in all, not too bad for a post apocalypse novel with time travel.
great story from repeated topicsgood potential but sadly not continuingguide appears OP but it's like a prediction power and not making the MC stronger is a great plot with thorough development
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Great story. Any hint u can give on the romance/harem? Also, will the MC always be solo or will he start his own faction? I love when MC actually has their own power base - it makes more sense in the game as well rather than doing everything solo, but up 2 u.
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Hope this gets picked! Seems interesting and like a nice spin on sign in novels. Big plus is from the summary it looks like no racism, no giving the characters white names, and good vibes