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The synopsis needs to be updated to help you get more readers.The narration needs a little more polishing and you would be there. The plotline is cool. I am looking forward to this project.
No me gusto se supone que no hace una aldea es un caballero, hace una mazmorra consigue algo bueno, procede a ser un subordinado de una mujer ramdom que le callo del cieloEs una estafa
The setting is full of blanks. I mean, there's an interstellar civilization! The 'game' is extradimensional and mysterious! But instead of telling us how all that works and/or why the game is even important in the first place, the author prefers to describe the virtual setting within the game instead. We don't even know what the MC uses to play the game! A headset? A coffin? A laptop? The author tells us NOTHING!
just found it rather mundane. translations often very poor. world came accross well described, characters just seemed too predictable and i got bored
read the comments bellow and I'm interested in reading this novel, it seem like an interesting read. right wish me luck in diving in to the novel now.
this is one of the best novels I have read, I bow to you sir handsome fatty. This novel truly has monarchic levels of potential on the level of grasping evil and legend of the great sage.
One of the best novel that I have read BUT I STOP reading because its HAVE the worst harem in novel world ... comaaaaan why the MC became stupid when he deal with women !!!! Because the girl loves him must love her in return? Who wrote this damned rule !!! It became the worst novel I ever read ... sorry for my bad grammarEnglish my second language >_<
I think the story needs a lot of work in many different area and isn't very interesting. I wouldn't recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Magical Realism,Short, Dark, DeepA series of short stories, of different genres. Simple yet thought-provoking reads. Good for philosophical problems and mused over before bed.
Typical wish fulfillment. I like the slower pace the author is using. Although it seems like i'm reading a slice of life and nothing really OP yet. Its pretty good. Clearly a novice, given how it lacks structure. But i'll be keeping my eye on it
Nice story ??? ?? Really, good job Thor ???can't wait for next chapters. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. The story flows and is fun to follow in each chapter.