Real Score: 2/5 (Fix your scoring Webnovel)"I think I would prefer actual oblivion to this afterlife.)First I'd like to say that this story does seem to have some cool concepts. Setting the story in the actual afterlife is probably the most unique concept for a Isekai story that seem so obvious in retrospect. Like how have we not done this sooner. Anyway, they also flip the OP Power/Gift on its head but having the MC sell it for cash "Because it can't be too hard to level up right?" Not realizing that most people can't get past level 10 or 15. And the gift would have put him around level 30. That was actually funny, and a good way to have your cake and eat it too. And even if the afterlife shtick is only aesthetic it's cool to see. And its character driven, so points there.But that's about it. Now for negativity.Honestly, this is just Another, "get stronger to happy ending cultivation story." Just with an RPG level system, (which is overplayed by this point) and a Spooooky esthetic. The MC doesn't even meet historical figures, or dead friends and family. COME ON! It was right there. It's just so hard to love something when it trades everything that could be considered unique or interesting for generic fluff. It's hard to stay invested. And Yes I'm told that it "Gets Good" because all cultivation story's "Get Good." But you people know that that isn't a point in its favor, Right? Stick your leg in some acid and after a couple hours, yes you won't be in pain, yes. But taking the next step in your personal journey will be a bit difficult, won't it?!How about we try this!Why don't we write stories that are good all the way through rather than only 1% well written while swimming in a sea of 99% blandness.
