Awesome novel man it's one of the best novels on this novel. The story is awesome. Bro this novel is super awesome. please don't stop this novel
Damn..This is one of the best books out there..Keep it up..Mc growth is excellent..Hope author will release more than 4 chapters a week..
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MC is Holy saint! Hero that saves damsel. Too soft. Too naive. This character would be perfect if MC was a 12 years OLD. After all knight in shining armor is the dream of all early ****'s dream. But for a big OLD man like him it doesn't suit his taste at all. I don't see any ability that stands MC out of the rest. He doesn't have any Idea of Online games. Nor is a nerd. All he is, is a muscle head with good combat power. But wheres the Cheat of MC? Cheats must be introduced in the first chapter in all fiction novels. Author intrudces to god level figures in the first chapter but doesn't tell How mc gonna dominate those figure in the future. This is just pure frustration/ I've already read till climax of this novel. But i dont see any ability that will help him become stronger than those god level figures.
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You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed.My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.
Too many unnecessary and redundant explanations that takes up more than half of the chapters........................................... 1 star
the start is quite bad but the story starts getting good after around a hundred chapters but by the six hundredth chapter it becomes inconsistent and destroys most development in the MC's powers and personality as well as changing from a cool neriteve to a neriteve that is full of holes and inconsistencyies
I think I saw this being pick last few month ago and then it got drop out from the list if I was not mistaken... And this pop out back? How about the previous one that got selected?
Love this novel and MC is SmartI'm not good at explaining clearly--------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------
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I love this story and I am truly disappointed about how Qidian decided to practically trash this story away by throwing it to the wolves. All your readers are telling you to change the translators(novels saga who are having a really bad reputation among our community) and even after translation nations decided to pick it up you took that away from them and put these incompetents to continue translating. I suppose mtl is the way to go much better than this translation... Way to go Qidian if this is how you are going to keep treat us readers than I suppose us readers we will treat you with the same amount of respect. Ptu...