I really liked this story it is what i was looking for, a ruthless, arrogant and selfish villain.I liked every aspect of the Mc character except for the cannibalism, but I won't dropping smth this good just because of that, I can tolerate it.The torture and murder scenes were described really well which is smith iIappreciate
AND I FUCKING THINK THAT THE AUTHOR HAVE NO WOMAN! AND THE AUTHOR EVEN PLAGIARIZED MY BEAUTIFUL CEO WIFE! THE FUCK IS THE AUTHORS PROBLEM! PLEASE DON'T READ THE STORY IT'S SO CRAPPY
The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.
Writing Quality ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️As far as I can tell(i don’t have the best memory) there are practically no erros in this book.Updating Stability ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️The Author updates at least once a day and two times most days so great job on that.Story Development ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️I love the story and the author has done and awesome job with the story and hasn’t left any plot holes or anything.Character Design ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️The character designs are amazing and all the important characters has extensive backround with no holes in them(unless there is something our author doesn’t want us to know yet)World Backround ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️The author has done a great job with the world backround and seems to have worked really hard on all the different characters and organizations in the world and the different events.Overall ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Overall this is an extremely well written books with little to no mistakes or plot holes. I definitely recommended if you want a book with a op mc and a VRMMORPG. There are also a lot of reincarnated as a slime references in the book. My only qualms about the book is there are some cliche romance scenes that I were disappointed about, and it does seem to be heading in the direction of harem(multiple girls are in love with mc).
I feel this is a great novel, but from what ive read the biggest point of dissatisfaction(for myself included) is the portrayal of the relationship of the MC and the Female lead. The twist in their relationship comes off very sudden and unlikable. I think this is mostly because we spend the entire story up until this point not liking and being aggrivated by her. I think that if the reason behind her betrayal was something the MC agonized over more and maybe asked of her yet recieved an answer that set up room for a future relationship but didnt fully answer the question we would see her in a different light. This is more effective than the silent martyr style she used because we never liked her in the first place. The way I view what was written is that she was a cheating scumbag that was rightfully hurt by the MC, maybe tried to kill him, as well as a lucky piece of crap that benefited from his reincarnation. Then it turns out to be a red herring and she was actually trying to protect him. Maybe if she tried to reach out to him in the past life but he constantly denied her or if she told him she felt like she deserved to be punished but doesnt regret what she did. If the relationship wasnt shown as such an open and shut case of revenge I think it would have flown better.
good novel. I admire the dialogues.
Lots of explaining Character backgrounds which is good but the story is a little slow and confusing. May need extra help with editing. The story improves with each chapter.
I have read this book upto chapter 179 and absolutely love it. I can't wait for it to be finished. I feel this is 2 books in one, the first 100 chapters is the first story. I hope this helps anyone who would like to start reading it ...
Can wait for Dante’s book to be published ...
I don’t like the last chapter it absolutely makes no sense why xenie would give agnarr in a plater to another woman ! The logic of it made no sense and the fact that they are mated and she acted like she cares more for the feelings of Leinar than Agnarr? So wrong ! And annoying! I almvery annoyed
nice read great book waiting on the next chapter
you are one of the best authors.. ...️...️...️loved this story very much!!