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"Remember Sir, Boss can only give you his five minutes. Please be concise and to the point."
It really was love wasn't it. That was why it was so close to the affection he had for Marcy or his friends but different like a lake and an ocean.
'Cecily?'
I like the fact that the story did not have crazy jealous exs or love rivals. It was a refreshing plot to read. Initially, I did not expect there to be magical elements in this story since the plot by itself was strong and interesting enough even without it. The plot had me hooked from the start. I also liked how well rounded the whole story was. I usually don’t liked multi-POVs in a story but in this case it was well done, making the story more multidimensional. The bond between Jian Ai, her brother and her mother was really wonderful! None of them were over the top and they respected each other’s opinions and decisions wholeheartedly. This highlighted the author’s mature writing style and the ability to portray so many complex characters in a holistic manner. The characters were well-developed and acted their age; be it the adults or young adults. The author did them justice. I wish we got to see more interactions between the three of them. Young Master Ji is such an entertaining character. I really enjoyed reading all the banter between both the FL and ML!The ending was rushed and somewhat abrupt. I wish there was more of how the M Group and how it developed in the future. Maybe an interview between the media and Jian Ai about being hte youngest CEO of such a big enterprise would have been great!Overall, a solid 4 out of 5 stars for me. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Quite honestly sometimes I look at a novel and say to myself 'damn maybe I should read that' but then I see the synopsis and get instantly turned off. Please for the love of this novel please put in a better synopsis, it's a problem that could prevent people from reading this novel.
Bof, je trouve que l'histoire aurait se tourné sur la gestion d'entreprisse avec un peu de comedie et des petites intrigues ... etc Mais pour l"instant je vais me contenter de ça
The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.
Nice for spend my free time. Thank you author sama.?
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