The novel is really good and the story is well driven with this futuristic-science thingy on it. I will be coming back to read more of it. ?
The book introduces an intriguing premise of a virtual reality game where players fight to become the last man standing. The story captures the reader's attention with its unique premise and the introduction of exciting game mechanics. While the writing could benefit from further refinement and character development, the book offers an entertaining read for fans of action-packed virtual reality adventures.
Cool Concept But there no consistency like he gets a reward for a quest and then it just never appies and the mc is acting with omnipotent knowledge of how his system works so thats cool and also he gets a skill that is supposed yl be a push his body to absolute extremes and he just uses it like a basic body boosting spell
Such a good book..I'll continue reading it
Whatever happened to this novel? Break? Cancel?
I loved It so much!!! Keep the vampire things plss. ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????☝️
I was gladly surprised that a title I didn't like was a instant love. The **** theme mingled with idol management is easy to read. So if you wish a light reading, it's for you.Main character is so likeable I'd like to pinch his cheeks. So tsundere! There are minor mistakes on grammar, tenses and also, dialogue tags, but nothing some editing can't fix.Go go!
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Writing quality - Superb! The author's writing style seems very experienced and reminds me of the sort seen in translated series.The plot so far seems really promising, I can already see the foreshadowing for an epic storyline. So kudos to the author for achieving that.The characters are extremely engaging and intersting to follow, the mc is quite likable so far.World background ... once again the author has done a good job in describing it too us without making it feel like an info dump.Really great job!
Started reading into it a bit im a fan noticed only the updates arent that stable story is very nice new take on the reincarnated vr mmo genre which im a big fan of ill be around to see how it will end up keep up the work author
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why is everyone giving it a low rating ...........