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must read, this is one of the best novel here
Very good novel but i am disappointed to see translator cut the mature parts. Really man? When I wanted to read something I want to read it wholly. Other than this translation is good. Story is good. Release rate awesome. Respect for that.
One of the best books I’ve ever read and I’m not 300 chapters in. I can’t describe how phenomenal this novel is. It’s not for everyone, as the author states, it’s a book more akin to water dripping through stone. However every drop is so thoroughly fleshed, it’s extraordinary. There’s no gimmicks, there’s no specialty, only Tao. This author truly has stuck by his goal in writing this fairy tail. He wanted to create a book about a young ink painting (Mo Hua) building the foundation he needs to cultivate to immortality through arrays. If you are a fan of arrays, if you are a fan of constant accumulation, and the gratification related to success from accumulation, this is the book for you. This book is slow, with long chapters, heavy emotions, the love of family, the strength of friendship, the strength of the common good, the strength of industry, and most importantly, the strength of the formation.
please continue this story it is awesome
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Shameless review here.Greetings everyone. Path of War both is and isn't your typical adventure story. Arthur Bennet, our main protagonist, is a devout Christian. This alone is enough to tell you there will be quotes taken directly from the King James Version Bible.It's important to note from the outset that this isn't anime fan fiction. To be exact, it's not fan fiction at all. While the setting is based on the popular Naruto franchise, the story takes a sharp turn into a brutal survival tale.Once our main character participates in a groundbreaking VR experience offered by Elysium, a high-tech company, his excitement quickly fades as he discovers a horrifying truth: the pain within the simulation is agonizingly real, despite assurances of a light pain response. Now thrown into this virtual prison, he's going to try his best to escape by becoming the world's main villain.The story as a whole is crafted as a suspenseful narrative that explores the dark side of virtual reality as well as man's true evil nature. We see the main character grappling with this new world, forced to adapt and fight for survival in a world that's foreign to him.If you're looking for a lighthearted adventure, this story isn't for you. However, if you enjoy thrillers with a touch of science fiction and an anti-hero protagonist thrust into extraordinary circumstances, then this might be a book worth checking out.Just be prepared for excellent story-telling and multiple characters to help drive the plot. Last but not least, please, for what sanity is left in this world, read the preface!
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Can we talk about how GOOD the dialogue is in this section? Specifically Hua Zhiyun's lines, because they are chef's kiss perfect. "Because I wanted to." — four words that say absolutely everything about her character. No justification, no moral high ground, just pure unapologetic agency. The maid expects an explanation and gets nothing. That's power. "What can you do about it?" — said while literally force-feeding someone poisoned cakes. The casualness is terrifying. "I thought your poison wasn't vicious enough. So I added another toxin." — delivered almost cheerfully, like she's commenting on a recipe. This is the kind of line that makes you laugh out loud because it's so audacious. And the horse dialogue had me absolutely losing it. "Pretty little miss... Want to ride this handsome horse? Come ride your Horse Brother!" This thing is shameless. It kneels. It grins. It's basically a flirtatious stallion and I need it in my life. The narrative voice itself is also really sharp—short punchy sentences, lots of em dashes, the kind of pacing that makes you want to keep reading. When the couple is begging, the author doesn't slow down for dramatic effect. Hua Zhiyun just kicks them away. The prose matches her personality: efficient, cold, no wasted movement. One line that stuck with me: "I'm the type who repays every grudge. If you've stained your hands... You don't get to escape." That's not just dialogue, that's a thesis statement for the whole story.
I'm in love with this chapters. Now I'm just waiting for everything to go right between them and the lovey dovey arc can start. Also I love Ryder ? and I can he and Noah is going to be our second couple. I just can't wait for their story to start. good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???
Interesting start but this feels more like a recap then a actual story. Mc is very boring and annoying. Constantly in the shadows for no reason and is rushing to get stronger and leaving every one behind way too long. Like he would go for a very very long time and then come back for few days. There is almost no fights and him getting stronger in detail to how strong he is doesn’t matter as he never fights.
As I am the author I will give myself 5 stars. This is a story I write in my free time, so don't expect regular uptades, I will try once a week, if you have any criticism or recomendation you are free to help me, I will accept everything as long as it is not offensive to me.