What i hated : Alright so the main character is a sorcerer not a warlock in dnd terms (warlocks have their power loaned to them by some entity, sorcerers get power from their bloodline).. + for some reason it keeps labeling anti social people as a case of autism Althought the story is bassed on dnd , it is not hard to understand it even if you dont know much about dndSumarry of the mc abillity : The main character awakened the Ron warlock bloodline (the originator of the bloodline is ron , hence the name) . Sorcerers get stronger by continously awakening their bloodlines , for the ron warlocks , they would have to rely on different things such as anger , being a madman . Etc... it depends on the invidual and as you may have guessed the mc relies on shamelesnessOh he also has a system made by the ron warlocks for the noobs ron warlocks which allows them to contact the main headsquarter and would guide them in awakening their bloodline
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Im in the ~100 chaps now and Im liking a lot. The MC is cool and serious and the way he is always calm is very cool. The plot is a bit cliché but I loke it
If you don't mind reading a slow-paced novel, this one is for you. You might get bored of the first 50 chaps but you have to get used to it since it will continue until the end. The world building is interesting and i like that MC is into a alchemist and a dedicated one. Well i recommend this novel for people who have too much time in their hands since this novel will be a heck boring as you read more because of the slow-pace.
So the MC was accused of stealing a super relevant technique. He was not tortured and they chose to keep him imprisoned and fed, without supervision. The ideal would be to justify this with: It is a Buddhist sect that preaches non-violence, so there is a prison that is overcrowded and the MC is poorly supervised because monks spend time training in meditation and him learning the way of buddha in prison is not negative. Or that the MC is from an elder's family and for the sake of preserving the male lineage he will be locked up until the elder comes out of seclusion and negotiates. Or my favorite there is a constant government spy hunt on the sects, but the government spies stole an object, and the technique is a false flag, the MC imprisoned by a false accusation obtains the object that actually has a technique inside.
To: AuthorThe concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointingThe main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could sayAnd of course the Slight but annoying grammar errorsI’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing
good story only question is if the anthor gonna add more? because I would love that and please let me know if you can.thx very much and hope you keep writing more wonderful storys
Everything is good so far, the only thing that's a turn off is that he supposedly gets killing intent just from imagination, and that worldwide people are panicked about an meteorite getting close to earth.Maybe I will keep thinking of k i l l ing bugs, and I will get a killer intent? My worries so far are human like system and harems.Overall the story is great with interactions between characters.
Author is mad racist
Flow of the story is a bit jittery, with lack of commas and spacings in some spots. Paragraphing can have a little more work done, because reading a block of texts is never fun.Characters are great, despite the jittery quality of writing you can tell the characters have at least more depth than the skin. World background? Gradual introduction...? Eh, but at least it's somewhat believable, despite the fact that having languages from different worlds be so similar is slightly too unlikely. Unless we are dealing with multiverse type of transmigration/reincarnation.Overall, 4/5 stars. Obviously, English can be improved, but no one is perfect.
I like the idea and story but the translator doesn’t keep the same name for people for more than a paragraph
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