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I hoped that you would be here :D nice job man, its the type of story I like, there may be some mistakes but in general, the writing is good,the story development may seem common to other people but I think it has great potential. the hidden agenda of 001 OS is keeping me on my toes and I like it! XD the only problem I have is that you didn't really say much about weapons and the technological advancements of humanity, it can't be just HUD and space travel. all in all the book deserves to be known by more people, keep up the good work.
This book has a unique and interesting plot. The setting is good especially when it's in the Philippines! Characters are already interesting. Just need a few more work with using the tenses but so far it's good! Wish you all the best! ??
MUY BUENA HISTORIA,PUBLIQUEN MAS SEGUIDO POR FAVOR, OJALA QUE LA HISTORIA SIGA ESE RITMO Y TENGA UN BUEN FINAL Y QUE NO TENGA HAREM ESO YA ES MUY COMÚN
Great read, trying to catch up and hoping the writer keeps up the great work. I enjoy the travel system and the. Ew and fresh world's. Greats twists and the s as youread, absolutely marvoleous
Excellent work. Almost perfect in my opinion. It has almost everything I wanted in a novel. Very philosophical work. Op (not too much that the story gets boring) mc. Very well connected plot. Mc has moral which a lot of novels don't. Realistic so that means you won't be finding girls falling in love with a single look that you often find in harem plots.
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Awesome story, love the idea so far..the mc is a fan of cultivation novels in a cultivation world. And he also feels he might be the protagonist..lol???
It has everything a story needs in my opinion. Good Characters, world-building, an amazing plot, and character development. Not to mention the authors writing style is simply enjoyable.
I love my Isekai; However, this was totally different from the norm, the author portrays the story in such a way that you're drawn in and before you know it you're already reading the next chapter! The writing quality was excellent! The sentence structure was top notch and the wording is easy to understand. They're also talented with imagery which made the chapters captivating and fun to read. Despite me not knowing much about Ren or Adelaide yet I love them so freaking much! Giving the reader little to no information about a character is a great way to draw them in as they're willing to fill in the blanks.Conclusion: A talented writer with a twist on the Isekai genre. I can't wait to read more and I'll definitely be looking out for the next chapter.
I genuinely don't think I can give this story enough praise. It's truly a shame that the author died, as it's one of my favourite fantasy novels of all time.Writing Quality - Flawless. As in, throughout the 419 chapters, I don't think that I found a single flaw.Stability of Updates - I just put this down as 5* because I remember the story having good update stability until a couple updates before the "end".Story Development - The story in the beginning is meh, but it eventually it becomes amazing. As much as I love this novel- to the point of having read it 5 times now- It's really not the best. It's still not bad, mind you, and I would never say it's boring or unreadable, but it's significantly worse than every other category. After the initial period of getting tossed around like a ragdoll by powers far beyond his means, the story is downright amazing, though. It's a simple Hero's Journey, but perfected and devoid of any of the gimmicks and lazy tricks of other similar story.Character Design - Good. Arran is a simple man. He has average talent for magic, he has average talent for using a sword, and he has average talent for insights. His only real talent is fighting. To say that he is a natural at killing people would be an understatement. And he's not the type to feel morally conflicted about it either. The other characters are also relatively simple. Despite this, I can't really call any of them bad. It's just good, basic character design, to go along with the good, basic story.World Background - Amazing. It's unfortunately never plumbed to its truest depths, but there are plenty of hints of threats that lie beyond the veil of secrecy. Every time I reread this, I can't help but feel like there's so much left untold about the world.I really can't express how sad I am that this story will never be finished. It's truly an amazing piece of writing, and I wish that he had at least uploaded his notes on the story and world somewhere. It takes everything I love about simple high fantasy and puts it all into one neat, simple package. It truly belongs in the hall of fame of fantasy webnovels, alongside the likes of The Wandering Inn and Mother of Learning.
the updates are stable the story is interestingthe character have a great personaility and a is shrewd... shrewd as in determining other weakness with a single gaze and baiting other into tra by exposing fake weknesses overall its a great read