"Absolutely! Their meat usually taste horrible but there are times when their meat turn delicious, when they asleep and when they're eating. To preserve the meat taste, we need to kill the deer fast, before the move too much, as the more they move the more the meat taste deteriorate! That's why I'm in rush before." (CH)
Arya asked "But the laws of nature are so prominent. How can we make changes to them?"
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Hello author I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel .
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It's a really good story I would admit but it could use some improvements but it's good actually there are some parts where the get was wrong but it's nots a boring story I guess my point here is that the story is great
Nice.I rate it a solid 9/10...............................................................................................................................
A brilliant start to a fantasy story and I look forward to reading more as it gets developed .
Read till chapter 5 till now, and I think the novel's pretty cool. The description of everything is good too however I would suggest to re-edit the initial chapters once again as there are a few grammatical mistakes. I know stats are important, but long complicated terms can make it slightly boring so I would suggest to reduce it if possible. Since there are some action scenes too, I feel the emotions could've been described better, rest everything is perfect and I wish you best of luck author.