JetLord004FLu
Pls more chapter the novel is epic don't stop now .really love the story line, the development and the character creation, but pissed abt the story update I want more don't let die of suspension
excellent storyI love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest.good perssonage constructionupdate more remember please because I love this kind of novel
Like it so far, as others have said it seems based on Let Me Game In peace, but hey all the new ones are rip offs lately so whats new....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Really enjoying this so far. If I had one major problem is that at times too much 'stuff' (read plot development) is happening and thus character development takes a back seat. I would like to see things slow down a bit so we can get some more character development, especially between the MC and his ladies.
A very unique concept instead of usual mc getting killed by a ' truck- kun ' scenario..I'm just fed up of those now...let's talk about this story , the world background and the characterisation of the entities feels new and fresh to me ..so I would recommend any new readers to give it a try as in my opinion you won't reget it.........
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging
Normally when i find a good novel i will review it meticulously and try to get everybody to give it a try, at least with the 39 free chapters, and this novel is indeed one such that would warrant that. However web novel has been on a streak of choosing **** novels and letting better ones like this one go untranslated hence i will not do a huge review. Read the 39 free chapters and even if you don't completely love the novel you will at least want its continued translation
Read the MTL, it was cool until the MC started paying back the favor of 1 useless spirit stone, he gave a HOLY Scriptures that he got after signing in.I was like meh... he is simping for the girl... Later he went on to save people without even hiding his identity and exposed himself to the Demon guy he killed... kind of sloppy.another issue is how his brother never came to visit him even decades after his brother decided in his head that he will visit his brother Final Nail in the Coffin of why I dropped this: The MC is growing too slowly somehow, so the Author decided to drop a SAINT over his dilapidated HOLY LAND. after that, the whole world is dropped over and I am sure next would be the immortals, so I dropped...read to check it out yourself... maybe I am wrong :)
This novel is dropped by the the author if i'm not wrong with 150 or so chapters. so I don't see any value of voting for the novel. I'm not trying to hate or anything, just thought to let you know/
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not bad .
