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Yes it was a good chapter hope you keep writing
"I said I would gut him if he tells anyone the same thing he did," the girl said.
Veer smiled and said "Okay then. Consider that this universe is a big lake which has its own ecology with different living beings and laws governing it. Small ripples are caused when a fish or small toad jumps on the water surface or when a small pebble is thrown in the water. There might be one or many small ripples at a time. You can imagine how ripples can superimpose on each other and how they get merged with lake system slowly. These ripples only affect the very small area where they generate and for only a small time. They adjust themselves and go away after making a small impact. Every ripple is a law in itself and it ends after doing its work. Ripples are generated by some event and are not permanent."
It was about this time that Quo came back, with Jaku this time. My cell door opened and Quo entered. "Okay, I'll come back to let you out when you message me." Jaku closed the cell door and left. Now it was just me and Quo. "..." It was awkward, like back when we first met. She sat next to me and pulled me tight. My face flushed as I leaned into her embrace. It was silent but the awkward atmosphere was fading. Eventually I lay down on her lap. I hugged her waist, pressing my face into her stomach. At first she flinched back in surprise but then she just smiled and patted my head. Once again my tears slowly started up again. This time Quo didn't have any comforting words for me. Instead rather than just making the tears go away for now, she went for the source of the problem.
"You were about to jump on Miss Sara."
"Of course, you don't need to order, I got that covered. So... Sera, how old are you?" Ana ask starting a conversation with Sera.
"Guildmaster, I need you and Dazzledance to keep those guys busy!" Jiang Fei shouted!
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It's a good story especially the power system, although I wish that that we will see more concept, like the concept of Growth or the concept of heat or the concept of distance or even the concept Evolution or Mutation. Still great story good job, I have already read more than 700 chapters.
TLDR: A fantastic novel about a childish world tree growing up slowly and becoming a very important tree in the Cosmos. Its slow going but moves forward almost every chapter. Either pushing the plot or expanding the world in bit sized pieces. It will feature a harem, yuri, futa, dark moments, sweet moments, sad moments and a system every creature has access to. Mortrexo's writing has grown a lot since their first novel and it shows here.---Possible minor spoilers ahead---A little over 110 chapters and this story is really starting to come together and look to be just as fantastic as Heaven. Earth. Me Mortrexo's first novel. As their second novel this one has improved quite a bit over their first. Things don't feel quite as rushed as the beginning of HEM. That also slows this novel down a bit in comparison to HEM. But, well it's about a tree what can you expect? Despite feeling a little slow the story makes progress and the world is slowly expanding. As Liu Shu and those around her try to establish themselves in the forest she was born in. The system used in this novel is quite well done and the breakdown of stats; tiers, item levels, levels and power balance are pretty straightforward with some twists. These twists seperate the talented from the untalented, the weak from the strong and the strong from the strongest. The system is more like a game interface everyone has access to, this quantifies the power of creatures but, doesn't necessarily add power to them its more giving numerical representation to mana levels, skill costs, health points and the like. Just because a character doesn't have a certain skill doesn't mean they can't try something. It's a very intuitive system for any fan of RPGs. There are certainly some broken skills to begin with but, they will become less overpowered as time goes on while still being useful. There are some interesting rules built I to the system too which I will not go into here. I do feel sorry for Mortrexo having to keep detailed spreadsheets to track each living creatures stats, skills, shards and resistances as well as the changes from level to level.The relationships have developed in quite a funny and interesting way. Tian Lian Liu Shu (main character a world tree) and her Sylven friends (possible harem members) are all very young and inexperienced with relationships, the Sylvens are quite the devoted type when they fall in love too, so take that as you will. The love interests are all female with other side characters like Flor possibly having there own relationships along side the MC's. Due to the main character being a tree I was worried about how the world will grow and expand with a stationary being. This is one thing I will commend Mortrexo for in this story, it is also the reason this story feels slow. Events take time to come to light outside the forest Liu Shu's in and in some cases take sometime for the fallout of those events to reach Liu Shu's grove. Mortrexo has done an amazing job having Liu Shu affecting the surrounding area she occupies, while not being able to move. The other characters like Flor, Cinderielle, Ariel and Verdantia provide a much needed education to Liu Shu and make it feel that, although Liu Shu is the MC the world moves on without her direct intervention in events.I'm very much looking forward to seeing how Liu Shu grows and helps those around her to become stronger too. Also how a tree gets its roots from one world to another?
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I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing
