well...there are 40 chapter but after 8 of them i can't read anymore...The story goes far too fast and the author try to joke a bit but it isn't funny at all...maybe it'll be better later but it's too much for mewe don't know anything about the MC and it's like a reproduction of other novel so no thank youI like original novel but this time... I won't read furtherGood luck in the futur
I'm sorry for the sad news ? for your health and impending hiatus of this novel. I hope to read more of your novel so I'll be praying for your quick and complete recovery ? please don't go and reincarnate to a new world with a system ? there are still much to experience in this world. Who knows, you might retain your memories in the next life and be more prepared in conquering the new world ?
Hey were r d updates....It hav been released from far time....nd dere is few updates....U knw if u don't want to release chapters accordingly.....den plz don't update novel name nd few chapters...It's coz of few of ur kind people....others authors got bad reputation
Like the story so far keep it up?? and please don’t drop it??????? like how the story develops so far?Like the story so far keep it up?? and please don’t drop it??????? like how the story develops so far?Like the story so far keep it up?? and please don’t drop it??????? like how the story develops so far?Like the story so far keep it up?? and please don’t drop it??????? like how the story develops so far?
Really working hard for this book guy's please show your support for and possible sent me your review to see how my work is liked by you all. if any mistake comment me I'll try to rectify it as soon as possible, thank you reading it.
I only write reviews to novels I really enjoyed. I read about 4-8hours a day and have written about 5 reviews at the span of 2 years of time. Simple said this novel is worth it.Unfortunately criminally few people have read it. The first 3 chapters were cringe and hard to read I had this novel over week on my list, but couldn’t get past the second chapter. After reading past it I couldn’t put my phone down reading all the chapters in one go.GJ author.
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Cool concept for a Mc distrust of organisations due to past life. Mc was a very skilled assassin loner orphan betrayed by organisation that raised and trained him, almost survived....The Mc heart starts to thaw when the hosts body he transmigration to is the elder brother of an pair of siblings, their family that has been slaughtered and he's the Mc is saved by his younger brother. The Mc accept his new life and family, triggering the system which he distrust as to him he feels its like the previous organisation issuing missions etc.... interesting concept, wanting to control his own life destiny not be dictated but missions from the organisation system. The writing style is clean and gets u attached to the characters. There is a few minor grammar issues once in a while could be predictive text. but easy to work out. Very enjoyable keep up the good work.
meh, Grammer could use help. The titles even have issues. Jumps around, tried to make good jokes but doesn't translate at all and things sometimes are kinda forgot or not followed up on. like a monster is killed for level up but he does level up or he is suddenly level 10 after alot of travel filler.
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Hi, I'm the author giving myself a 5-star rating. Shameless! Please give this story a try! It's worth it! I promise! (And not a false promise like the 5-star I gave myself on the stability of updates :-p )