Read a few chapters. They were fun, i like this style. keep it up.
lanjut lagi, semangat ceritanya menarik. seorang yabg berjuang untuk menjadi lebih baik pasti akan lebih menghargai hidupnya. dan jangan terlalu berlebihan tidak suka pada sesuatu karen itu gak baik.
This book is fire, hehe. Very nice and entertaining. I am waiting for it to be picked. 三尺神剑
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the only way to describe how good this is would be the meme of Gordon Ramsay saying "finally, some good frickin food." I. LOVE. THIS. NOVEL. ☆☆☆☆☆
If you want sth unique. Sth new.. This novel is not for you. Just a cultivation novel, with many face slapping and cliches..............................................................
I got the 4 vote it is a pretty good novel and you should continue write I would love to read more of your future novels so keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update]
The story is really captivating and is very interesting. The characters are very interesting too! I honestly ship two characters and I hope they become a couple in this story. The stability of updates is a little slow for my liking but that's okay. Keep up the good work author!
Read up to 800+ chapter.
Story started off very interesting. MC opening dungeon shop with real monster he captured from different world that he could visit. As time goes on he gain more subordinate and his shop became more famous. At least until chapter 500+.
After that the story seems to slow down massively. One of the story arc took around 100 chapter which solely focus on 1 battlefield being described by multiple character. It felt too padded.
One of my issue with this novel is the writing on the action portion. Author done a good job writing about the business part but the action part is lacking. There is a severe lack of tension during the fight especially in the later part of the novel. I don't know why author felt it was necessary to insert jokes during the fight, multiple times, in almost every fighting part of the novel. It is really out of place, ruin the tension and break the immersion during reading.
My last problem is with the characters, especially the MC. He really doesn't have much development even after so long. There is event where he seemed to experience character growth, and then he returned to how he is before. After some time the "growth event" occur again, and he still the same. This happen at least 3 times and changes are barely noticeable. The same can be said for his subordinate, they have no character development at all. The one with most development in character and story seemed to be his customer.
Overall the story started off good until around chapter 500. It did not turn bad, just dull and boring.
My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!
Im giving this 5* just because I saw the words "A record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality". I cant wait to see this out if trial reads and into the sea of books Im reading daily ??
Guys sorry for spamming but I really want to read it after 40 chapters..if I don't do it..... bucha noobs select same kinda sketchy story again.....this is a refreshing change of pace &I am giving it atleast 5 ? stars for first 20.although I still don't know if it'll be selected but I can only try.... proly give 5~10 same reviews.sorry ❤️? for this again ???? .
Man this is really good stuff. Not really much else to say though and I need 140. Sigh......................................................