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Have not read yet ,not a single chap.
But 14chap/week got me.
Thx for this,i can kill some time with this
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I'd say go for it ... before deciding if it's worth your time
It is one of the interesting but slightly too stupid novels. It indulges deeply in clichés and turns ever more nationalistic. This got ever worse until it can just not be stomached anymore, specially directly promoting Chinese tyranny going much further than just downplaying it as many novels do or have to do.
Heck the summery is strange but meh whatever I just here to get xp and new book so might as well read it..............................................
I read the mtl, but no spoilers. Read them at readwn by the way.
I randomly put the stars.
It's good until about chapter 200. Now, I understand that Chinese novels practically need natio (space just in case) nalism because of the CCP, but the author literally spends some 20-30 chapters with the main character just ruining the Japanese. The author doesn't just make a few demeaning remarks here and there, but literally goes out of his way to make it a crucial part of the story. I understand that Japan did horrible things in 2nd world war, but the author goes out of his way to make every Japanese person literally less than human. The author even goes out of his way to make the Japanese summon this ultra boss, just so the MC can stomp them even further into the dirt.
It's honestly ruined this novel for me. What a disappointment.
So far, so good, In the first chapters some may be repulsed by a very bizarre way of writting that they wouldn't be used to reading at all but I would recommend to stick around as the author makes fast progress as they write each chapters, of course, there are grammatical mistake but every story has them, the plot progresses at a good space, nor too fast nor too slow, in short, I would recommend you stick around and give this novel a read!
Extremely Enjoyable and Entertaining.
I really like the whole concept of Measurements and Author It's using It's potential to a satisfactory degree.
I won't spoil anything but here is a general review:
Writing Quality: Really good, Of course this is for a novel in this app but even then I haven't seen a Grammer mistake (low english knowledge as it is my second language).
I believe Writing is one of the strongest aspect of this Novel.
Story Development: Really good as well.
I like the pacing and how the story is progressing, It seems that Author is aware of where he is going with the plot.
Character Design: I like this one, I can't give a professional review about this aspect of the story but I, myself really like it.
The MC is 3 dimensional and other characters have personality as well.
I like that MC isn't the only one with a Past veiled in mystery.
Updating Stability: Kinda slow, wish it was faster, but Author hasn't gone back on his word of giving 3 to 4 chapters a week.
Still writing Quality can make you overlook the slow updates.
World Background: Not sure what to say about this, In one aspect, they are various organisations and cities that have been named and play a important part in the story that I like and I think are cool, In another aspect I still think it could be worked on better because I sometimes get confused when a City is being talked about.
The Organisation Are Cool tho, I like them.
All in all, Great novel, Sad that this is getting slept on.
Better than 99.9 % of stories here.
Love it! Very well written, the characters have depth, and the world is interesting and unique! I'm very intrigued by the MC and I cannot wait to read more and learn his history.
This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this.
But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw.
Please like this so people can see this first.
This is my first time writing anything other than short stories in school. Please give this a read and tell me what you think about it. All constructive criticism is welcome. Over time my writing will improve. This is going to be a decently long story about Havok and his companions striving to achieve their dreams.
This is mind BLOWING!!!
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