even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story
The harem cliches are gold. I'm dying every few chapters for different reasons. Its also not a simple level up book. The mc doesn't need magic to win against op people and I love that. Mass release... please...
The book is new so I hope everyone can give it a try. I will also try it out :3
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Well can't say a lot since it has only a few charapter now, so my review probably isn't very accurate. However from what I've seen so far there could have some better word choices and the writing is a little ******* (not that I'm one to say, my English is also ****). It has promissing story, if the author does well, the chapters are little short but overall it's pretty good.
Only 7 chapters in and it's already becoming one of my favourite stories.
The only thing where this story lacks is in the proper structuring of words and sentences but there, I can't blame the author as they are working without any editor and as the apology chapter says, English is not their first language.
The story is magnificently written so far. I can already see a lot of themes like depression, loneliness, insecurity, despair, societal prejudices, parental themes, abuses, possessiveness and a lot more to come.
Characters are extremely great so far. I can see all of them getting attention and focus and for me, characters matter the most!
Symbolism are also excellent and properly used.
Keep up the great work.
In this author's latest novel, the author tries to work harder in terms of writing, character design, and storyline, even though the historical genre mixed with kingdoms is a new topic that the author explores but does not display the enthusiasm and hard work that the author tries to present in the novel. In short, please enjoy it and if you can be generous, please provide constructive criticism and input because it means a lot to the author.
Read until chapter 25 and you will know if you like it or not. For me, I loved it. The character building is great and so is the world building. Thanks to the author for the great work and one question, is this going to be a harem type or a romance type of story?
I've read Through this multiple times and their are a lot of things I like about it. It is a little bit dark, but its tagged as such so I cant complain. I feel like the passing is pretty good, and the general concept and characters are all established right away, so theirs no waiting around until chapter 5 for the story to really get started.
Welp. Another good book added to my library.
The premise is nice and the writing is smooth. I can see the big picture of the things and it does interest me a lot
Good luck on your book, I guess.
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I don't like it when people put a tag overpowered when it is not an overpowered mc this story is actually weak to strong NOT OVERPOWERED........
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Read up till 100+ and it sucks. I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.