Best trial read for this week. There are no obvious flaws that I can pick out in this novel. Although the idea is nothing new the execution is pretty good. No obvious plot holes, the MC is not brain dead or arrogant. The story progression is fine aswell. All for all I’d say while it’s no where close to being the best novel I’ve read, it’s a decent read to pass time.
Honestly! I smiled when i read the first line of the synopsis!
Creative!
I cant wait to read through and see whats its about all in all.
A must read!
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The story is good and interesting..there are some scene that i felt funny making me laugh seeing how the person react after being robbed clean by MC lol. All in all its a good novel and i enjoyed it.[img=recommend]
Just one thing though... sometimes the author had some error in vocab n grammer and on how the word in a sentence are being used (one error i remember is sedative when describing a woman..i should be seductive). So i think author should take note of it.
muito interesante gostaria de ler mais sobre a historia infelismente nao tem mas capitolos, gostaria de saber se vai ser mensal ou diariamente o lançamento de capitolos .
story is great, honestly never found a dull moment. only MAJOR issue is the author only pumps out 2-3 chapters a month, so for "privileged" access, you spend $50 for 2-3 chapters. Absolutely worthless expenditure. To put it into perspective, sometimes only ONE chapter will come out in a month, and when a new month hits, THEN they release ONE more chapter.
Good novel bro........................................................................................................................................................................
The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?
so bad, translation is trash, powerlevel trash everything is trash........................................................................
Awesome novel the only thing is that him hiding his identity seems a bit forced and unneccasry it really takes the thrill out of things makes it seem like there is nothing truly on the line
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
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