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Shameless Author here reviewing his own book. This is my first time doing a mix of post-apocalyptic, cultivation, and comedy genre. If we reach 1k power stones, I will mass release five chapters! If we reach 500k views, another five chapters mass release! That’s my goal so please help me out! This is my WPC#148 entry. I hope I win something or this would be discontinued (ಥ﹏ಥ)Let's make it to the top everyone! And as always, thank you for all the support! Sincerely, DaisukiDayoSenpai
Well then, since I shamelessly rated my first novel, I shall do it again on this one :DTo all my Apex System readers, fear not! I have not dropped Apex System, I repeat, I have not dropped it!I would probably do a better job in writing this novel since it's my favorite genre. Yes, VRMMO novels are my favorite <3Well, I hope you guys enjoy this novel.That's it for now. Peace out!
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This story is both beautiful yet saddening. Despite it not being a story about an apocalypse or about the end of the world, it captures what I have barely seen any other novel does—the feeling of helplessness that comes from being out of options. But enough with the grim and gloom onto the review!-Writing Quality- First off, I just want to say that the writing is near perfect. Unless I read out loud and search for flaws, you'll probably skip over any flaws in the story. The words used in the story are perfectly rounded to the point. It's not repetitive, but its also not trying too hard. If there was one issue not including grammatical errors that are almost impossible to avoid, it would be a little bit more description of the environment they live in and not just the direct area the MC is at.-Stability of Updates- Only being in the third chapter, I can't say anything. However, looking at the current chapters, it seems the author has a nice rhythm to the updating speed.-Story Development- The first chapter truly encompasses what one would think life would be when poor and in this type of situation. While diving slightly into philosophy, the Novel honestly portrays the case our Main Character is in to the point you can't help but root for him. -Character Design- So current, I'm in love with the Main Character and his personality. He's not edgy, nor is he stupid. He has the innocence genuinely equal to that of someone born in a bad situation. The idea that thinks things will be beautiful after getting a job may seem stupid to us who live in somewhat ok conditions indeed shows the author knew what he was doing.That being said, I don't really feel for any other characters in the Novel, including the siblings or the parents though that is definitely due to the lack of interactions with them and not due to the author.-World Background- I like the idea that the world is the same but also different. I love that the author is using slight changes to make the world his own in the Novel and is genuinely expanding the horizons of the world with each chapter. However, I do feel there is a lack of detail on the overall area in this world, which would help with the reader's imagination.
I really liked that the mc is straight forward and told that woman he didn't want trouble almost no others mc does that so I like that his really straightforward.
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Not the best but good.Characters are knida forced and unnatural specially dialogues.
honestly the novel said it's pretty good premise. nothing bad really happens when it comes to story progression or anything it doesn't feel rushed it doesn't feel forced, the majority of the side characters feel like they truly do have a personality and a couple of the ones who we think are going to be a one-off character end up sticking around or coming back for more chapters it's an interesting book. the author clearly took his time and knew what he was writing. one thing I like is that it's explained that the main character comes from a regular Earth he's never killed anyone doesn't have any aggression nothing like that, I don't know where he kills a bunch of people and he doesn't feel any remorse or regret and you think it's very jarring because how did he have a sudden personality change. but once he takes off the mask that is making him level-headed and suppressing the majority of his emotions he feels everything at once. it shows that the main character is still himself and that there's also demerits to the supposedly omnipotent gear he's wearing which is another piece of a novel I like. also the whole point of this novel is building up in academy and having its Prestige known throughout the lands. the system enforces that and it goes well with the story. you inherit the strongest magic Academy from ancient times that's Fallen under weather due to the fact that it's been closed down and the system you have that wants you to rebuild the academy forces you to stick to the academy and not treat it as a side job. really interesting cuz a lot of these novels that sound interesting where they have some kind of business that they're forced to maintain in their system revolves around it eventually fall out of the business or deal and make the character go to a generic cultivation novel but this hasn't happened and it doesn't seem like it'll happen so I give it a 10 out of 10. might change it later might not who knows I just know it's really good so far and I didn't see a lot of reviews and I thought
I read this book.... Like to say it has potential..... It has many plots..... It's good that writer is making fast process for MCs childhood...... But i would like u to slow down. ... When he reaches age of 15....,very nice book.. Should read........ . . . ????????????????????