Petition to bring back Warlock Apprentice and my own little piece of advice: don't pay even a cent to WebNovel, because the novel which you like will most likely be dropped later, after WN thinks it can earn more money from another story. If you pay, it means you support their policy.
I love the concept of beyond almighty like there are other beings than the God. Overall, interesting story.
What can i say I've fallen deep into this pit and now i can't turn back so here i am embracing it and reading to my heart's desire so don't judge me
Such a good poster image is wasted on this novel though it is good if you just release nine chapters and take a fucking five month release I will say it totally was a waste
Good setting only the chapters are too short OVERALL it's good Good setting only the chapters are too short OVERALL it's good
Shameless Author here. Rating my one Fanfic creation 5 star WAHAHAHAHAHA.THIS SHOULD BE ON THE FANFIC SELECTION BUT It's on NOVEL so anyone know how to change that ? ha-ha.......................ENJOY.
Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job.However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable.Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!
Perfect!! What a fabulous concept!! I got thrilled while writing, amazing storyline, the MC is also amazing everything is perfectly designed..
Honest ReviewFound this one has potential, feels a lot like Sword Art Online. (A very hard to read version of it.)The Good: Character classes are unique and it is nice to see an MC that isn't 100% righteous for once.The Bad: Hard to follow... it jumps around a lot with little to no indication. I found the world setting kind of convoluted and some of the situations to be pointless. It feels like a lot of this is filler content so far because I really only care about Shiro and people he interacts with.The Neutral: Objectively describing someone as "sexy" leaves it open to interpretation, that's not a bad thing by itself, but who thinks it is sexy? (i.e. the observers, the characters, the readers, NPCs?) Maybe I missed it, but why are they stuck in the world?Maybe add a note that senshi = warrior and the significance of it so people don't think "WTF are senshis? Sounds like sushi!" or something like that. (Assuming that is what you meant it to be)Feel free to review back and I'll add you on Line if you would like editing help.
read 55 chapters and I still don't know who is the mc David or Alexander lol
Good premise but bad execution. the story itself is just a repetative cyle of the Mc trying to make his dungeon bigger and better, and the outladish actions of the gamers for comedic effect. rinse and repeat then call it a story. If you are looking for something unique look elsewhere, you have been warned. but if you got nothing to read its good enough to stave off boredome.
I have only left a few reviews on my journey on this site...i try not to read new novels or any novel that doesnt have few hundred chapter's. I will say im glad i picked this one up good read so far..