Too much Plot Armour!MC has a personality disorder (He doesn't think of consequences before taking his decisions, As for my remark, you'll know once you've read it completely.)Waste of a romance...(Seriously? Why is there a romance in this novel? He is a ruthless heaven-defying cultivator, and in my opinion, his heart is just too soft...)Again, Why does he act like a just and honorable person after killing so many? Does killing not affect his personality? And duh, I'm not talking about just one hundred or thousands...Romance sucks, his personality sucks, his way of turning down other women, who actually loves him a lot, disgusts me to no end...Overall, Plot flow and Quick arcs are good.
Disappointment ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................Generic Chinese Novel
this book is below what everyone expect world info is lacking very much it has a trash harem and a simp mc the only novel thing was him being an ancestor but it was also destroyed by hint that there can be another person lik him from earth ofcourse it's a girltrash character progression the ji girl is a waste of character the author didn't did anything good with her she disrespects him even after he has become a simp for her .and story is a full rushed it's is very fast moving but not too fast that u will get confused and the another surprise is author lack of ability to show how people of his clans are so dumb that they are literally not even shown many times
seems good but would like raw name
I lost it by the loli arc, it was just too disappointing to read compared to the author's other novels.I am still reading BABG and I only dropped VPVA:Prequel when GT stopped translating it. But I thought this would be much better than it became.
I'm listing MAJOR arcs( there are so many minor arcs too) after about 900 chapters (upto 1688 chaps), don't worry I'm not spoiling much, just enough to make you guys wait for them:1.Martial arts arc (good arc):We find out where rao aimin is, why she's been busy and some cool fights.2."king of the mask singer" arc( one of the best arcs):It's a singing show where celebrities wear masks so that nobody recognizes them and sing, if anyone is eliminated they have an option to remove their mask.Zhang Ye gets banned for some reason and writes this show, gives it to beijing television and participates in it secretly. 3.Chinese chess arc( very good arc):Old wu's father is legend in chinese chess.AI chinese chess PETER is introduced, no country's champions are able to defeat.4.Olympics arc(average arc):Not that good arc. I remember him scolding sports world.5."I am a singer"( very good arc):This too is celebs singing show.6.Wedding arc( yay one of my fav arcs):nothing to say, their wedding and world getting shocked.7.Spring festival arc( really good one):He plans whole spring festival for CCTV, so you can pretty much guess what happens.8.Korea arc( good arc):he goes to korea as a part of some program.Introduces heavy metal to this world.Sell his calligraphy.9.Manga arc( good arc):He makes popular mangas. Doesn't complete though.10.Hacker arc and final concert arc:(one of THE best arcs but maybe not for some):He rolls difficulty adjustment dice and gets five times increased difficulty for 2 days.On second day big saber bro is accused of being the hacker [2] (Zhang Ye's hacker name) and is arrested, knowing that he chooses to surrender himself but before that he performs asia's largest concert in olympics stadium (very touching concert) and bades farewell to entertainment industry and gets arrested.11.comeback arc (very good arc):He contributes to army secretly for four years and hence gets released early. World forgets Zhang Ye. For his comeback he makes a chinese drame and participates in "I'm a singer" show in which he sings touching songs.After that noble prize arc, then he make chinese movie which is highest grossing in chinese movie history in our world, after that he makes "Man vs Wild" in International CCTV and right now he is ****** "Frozen" in hollywood.Sorry for this being so long.**: I hope you guys a give a like so that other people who are interested in spoilers might be able to notice it.
Writing quality 4Story development 3Character design 2Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars.World backround 4.I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess.Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars.The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story.Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him. Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination
Looks, I will admit that this novel is entertaining and despite so many frustrating moments, I actually enjoy reading this. BUT!Here the but, is that this is novel is barely original. I just read this until 60 chapter, and maybe it will get better and more original. But damn man, at this point I can count two novel with the same plot and the same character in this novel. The first novel is Beautiful Top Star and the second is Top Management. I meant, I get it if it was only as inspiration, but all the chapters that I read so far mostly looks like cut, paste and edited. Tbh, if it was adaptation from only Beautiful Top Star I am probably okay reading this. But then came the plot that looks almost the same as Top Management and bruh this really starting to looks like plagiarism.Not only that but the grammar and typo also more abundant in here. But I don't mind it because I was just finishing reading some MTL novel and my mind still in mtl mode, so it was mostly okay
我的天呐，Ye Qiu帅爆了！他的中文名是 叶秋 吗？这是我看过的最好的小说，听说在中国这本小说已经完结了。请问要怎么才能看到更多章节呢？哪怕是中文版本的也好。请起点中文版也一起上架谷歌商店吧。每天一章的速度太慢了，完全赶不上我读的速度。哦上帝，我简直要窒息了。从此Ye Qiu一生粉，作者简直是天才！
Most of the characters that I ended up liking were pets based on Pokémon. Humans end being the most unlikeable characters in the book. The structure of the chapters and everything about the mc are cliche, His fights with the system are an attempt at humor that I find is just filler that contributes nothing to plot.
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I am at 55% of the book & for a non native english speaker, the author has done a great job. However, I absolutely hate Jake. All he does is hurt her, make her feel unwanted, entertain the possibility of other females and use her when he gets horny like a whore. And all she does is chase after him.