Sparky20049
Excellent book with great storytelling and interesting characters. A great read for anyone to get into, especially if you enjoy fantasy settings. The chapters are very well paced and it doesn't feel cumbersome to read at any point, as a matter of fact I can't put my phone down. Great work by the author, as was expected after his previous book was a hit as well.
invisible dragon saw shit with his minds eye it was super aesome
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Everything is good but the story is going too fast and my head is spinning ????u200d↔️???u200d?thanks for the story ???
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
I'm not yet a reader, but I'm hoping your storh will reach a million views before this year ends. I will come back for my next review. I'd love to read tribe stories and found a little. Thanks.
Unique and different. A person being reincarnated as a system. Just a few chapters but I am already hooked. On top of that, the writing was superb. Each chapter was written well. Everything was perfect. Author, keep up the good work!
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This story has such a great premise, and a unique character in Lucy whom we haven't seen before in serial fiction. She is so strong and selfless I am really excited to see how the story unfolds. The writing style is so inviting as well. I feel I'm a part of the Hastings family!
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The story starting is little overboard. But the MC's characters are really good and evolves along with story. Loved their interactions woth each other and the baby.
A GOOD START. I really liked how they made decontamination chambers before you enter or exit anyplace. The sci-fi world setting is also very good. but you need to make it a bit evolved in future coz there are a lot of scientists. The character design is also very good. The stroy is interesting but too early to write a detailed review so I look forward to your growth.
