MC is trash and shouldn't even be the MC. Weak willed and doesn't have what it takes to reach the top of his world!
The story till chapter 53 held my undivided attention. Even thought there seems to be a noticeable number of grammatic errors, its nothing we can't ignore. The author made it a different kind of story by giving the mc a sadistic feel with enough brains to plan.
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One of the best books i have read in this Site. Had me reading non stop for hours and hours. Keep up the great work.?????????????
I'm sorry to say this but i could read only till the chapter 3. Normally i would give it change, because i genuinely like harem genre and rarely drop a novel involves a harem route.But your novel feels like a causal conversation between 2 people due to your writing and narrative. Sometimes i can't understand what's happening due to things developing randomly and fast without having a proper explanation and building. Like he casually says he's from another word and she shouldn't say anything about it. But she just straight accepts it. No questions? No thoughts or precautions before revealing you're from another world? It seems everything is OK.
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