Sparky20049
This novel was good,, ,I don't knw why the author left it incomplete
I just want to tell the author that PLEASE SPACE THE BIG PARAGRAPHS THEY ARE HEADACHE INDUCING AND ARE HARD TO READ.Also, I just saw the first couple of chapters
Story seems decent, nothing exceptional tho. Might have gotten a 3 star but the novel req payment 15 chapters in so it gets a 1 from me. So not really worth it.
Yoooooo. Snail in the house. Wait a sec..... USE SOME OF THE TIME U PUT IN HERE TO RELEASE A NEW CHAPTER FOR THE TALES OF GODS AND DEMONS. UR TORTURING US WITH THE WAIT. U LITERALLY LEFT THE STOTY AT A CLIFFHANGER DUDE. I LIKE IT SO MUCH ITS THE 8TH TIME IM REDING IT IN THE LAST 2 MNTHS. Come on bro release a chapter yo.Whatever ur books are still lit ??Keep up the chapter release rate AND RELEASE A CHAPTER FOR TDG ???
I enjoy this story but its like you type it out and don't even re read it over for spelling mistakes. You just post it. I had to stop reading when a prince was called price. Words aren't capitalized either.
Trash. (Forget previous character) -> Introduce new character -> give them food/treasure -> act like jp beta mc -> you now expert -> rinse repeatManaged to barely read till 410 chaps only to see if anything changes but no.Also no story, just copy pasta story from CN folktales. 1D characters and shallow interactions.Extreme amount of filler. MC's obsession to eat literally anything. Like even eating someone's pets, he was only think how paws would taste and this and that.Info dump. And on and on and on.
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I have read till 185 on scribble hub, I like it but its too slow and I would prefer if the harem development would be fast, it is taking too long.
Generally enjoyed the first few chapters but then it went downhill after but was bearable till he killed Kassia of for no other reason but to further the plot.
This is a solid 3 star novel where MC has a leveling system and he just keeps fighting someone or something every other chapter. No character development and no originality. Either fighting people at school or fighting people are a ruins or fighting people at somewhere.
A really excellent story. I'm a sucker for mech stories in general, but this is still stand out. Solid writing, consistently good grammar and a protagonist that doesn't seem to be having an OP lucid dream put this story at the top of those on webnovel.That said, please do something about that cover. I almost didn't read the book, assuming anyone who half-assed a cover rather than spend five minutes on it would be half-assing the book. Granted, that wasn't the case, but it's just shoddy.It's easy. Here's how:1. Go to Pixabay (https://pixabay.com/en/) which has free commercial quality images. 2. Search for mechanics, or robotics, or something else you find interesting. Download an image. 3. Open it in paint. 4. Make a colored border by using the "fill area" bucket-shaped button. Black, or a darker shade of the background color for the image itself will work well. 5. Then click the letter that lets you add text and name it. Put "The Mech Touch" at the top, and "By Exlor" at the bottom. Make sure to use a different color for the font so that it's legible (eg, white on the black border), and to use a font size large enough to be legible.6. Save and upload as your cover.
First 400 or so chapters are pretty good. The story focuses on business, as the MC develops his tourist attraction and food company with the help of his cheat and builds his social network among high society and other useful acquaintances. It may be because I don't read this type of stories often, but I found the story quite engaging. There were few major translation problems.Then, at around ch 430, the translator changes into one who does barely edited MTL and has zero regard for consistency when it comes to names. The MC's wife especially has like 5 or 6 different names. It's still understandable, but it's not fun to read.What's worse is that the story is becoming political and the old nationalism/supremacism problem that plagues most Chinese novels set in the real world raises it's ugly head. Early on, there are a few incidents that gave me a good impression of the author/MC, they seemed to treat foreigners fairly and even subtly criticise Chinese racists. At most there was "positive nationalism
