Aaron smirked, knowing full well that Jackson was going to train his butt into the ground to get a firm grasp on his aura. Until then he should just be appreciative that Jackson even thought to do something like this.
'What should I do now? Sigh…' (Jen)
live a good life.. ㅠㅠ but if invisible dragon got too strong
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
the story has potential. the characters are ok. but the writing quality is shit. characters talks about themselves in third person. no corrections and poor English.
Good luck to the author with this story.
I like the story so far, done reading the first 10 chapters. I'll continue again later. Is it a trend today that historical story's ML was always in love with someone else? ?
let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers.our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around.the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully.the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to.updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday.i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future.all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3
It is highly recommended its plot is quite interesting. It really have a nice rythym in it. Kindly upload its new chap as soon as possible cause I can't wait for it
Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.
Shameless Author Review here:I have enjoyed a lot of similar genre stories on this platform and with my background I felt the urge to put my own work out there. I am dedicated to putting out flawless chapters and if you locate any grammatical or spelling errors, please point them out and they will be immediately fixed.I am consistently working on creating a nice balance between chapter updates and will committedly release chapters on the daily. I wish I had put more work into the first chapters and published more than 1,000 words each chapter, I may go back and up their word count without adjusting the actual flow of the chapter. I maintained a minimum of 1k words per chapter up until chapter 30 at which point I raised it to 1500 and will not go below that. The story will continually be developed and follows Marcus and his adventures through a game that has much more going on behind the scenes than he had initially thought. The risks will constantly be increased as the story progresses and the novel becomes more fleshed out. I absolutely love creating characters and having them fill roles within the story. The cast shall be expansive and constantly growing and decreasing. I aim to have no two characters alike and want to have a nice variety in the main and supporting cast. I love adjectives and really enjoy growing the world around our cast and hope that shows through my work. I love world building and generating the setting that our characters are in. I really hope you guys enjoy the story and take the time to like, vote, and comment, I read every comment and am more than happy to reply to your questions. Feel free to join the discord to see more behind the scenes information and connect with fans.
Very enjoyable! It has an interesting concept and is executed nicely. English gets better in later chapters :) . A hidden gem indeed. Fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill Fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fillFill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fillFill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill fill