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Sadly I am but a broke child so I couldn't afford to go beyond chapater 56 however I still believe this was 100% worth the read! I'm not going to try to be technical since I know nothing about writing, I highly reccomend this novel
Acting like a villain? Yeah no, he doesnt. Actually keep reading this if youre into dense MC and minsunderstanding. Its a japanese protag, he said "i will be villain" but said and did the most MC-est thing. Would rate it higher without that charade and straight up be "i will steal this mc love". Well it was my fault for ignoring that weeb as- japanese name?
I love the thematic elements and the concept. There are some really interesting first steps here in world building, and I think it sets the stage very well. I am also a big fan of the heroes journey elements here and I can't wait to keep reading it!
Biased review cause well, translator here! Buuuuut just wanted to quickly come here to thank everyone for giving this novel a shot, we're really really excited to release this novel this week in conjunction with Worlds 2020! This has been one of the most technical novels we've worked on but we had a lot of fun researching League tactics while working on this novel. (Because how often do you get to tell your girlfriend that you're gaming for the sake of work?!) It is our sincere hope that you guys will enjoy this novel as much as we did translating it. If you like the novel, please do leave us a review. If you have any questions at all, please leave them in this thread, we will try to get back to them as much as we can! Again, thank you all :)))) <3
READ IT PLEASE! YOU WILL FIND GREAT THINGS IN THIS BOOK1 GREAT THINGS! THINGS THAT ARE FUN TO READ ABOUT AND THINGS THAT ARE FUNNY. THINGS WITH CLIFFS AND THINGS WITH SECTS. JUST THE TYPE OF NOVEL FOR A WEEKEND OR WEEKDAY. READ IT ALL THE TIME!
First of all, the idea of Anima is inspired by Gu from Reverend Insanity but I've put my own twist on it. Hopefully it's at least a little bit original and you like it.Outside of that, I think the book is quite unique, especially in terms of how the world is and what the main character is like. However, I won't say too much other than that the MC is pure evil.Best parts of the novel:Characters - The main characters all have depth and personality, but it's not just them. Every character has at least some thought behind them, even throwaway characters. That means you won't get scenes where side characters act stupidly for no reason.Quality of writing (I am English, I speak great English, don't expect spelling errors or anything)World building - I've put a lot of effort into creating the continents, thinking about what species live there, what environments there will be and all that good stuff. I'm especially proud of the more that will start to be revealed as the novel goes on.Bad bits:Dialogue - Some conversations may seem a little clunky or stiff. This is the main area of my writing that I'm trying to improve, so hopefully dialogue will become more natural and free-flowing as the novel progresses.Slow(ish) development - The novel isn't a slow starter at all, it begins with 3 high action trials and there are lots of fight scenes after that as well. What I mean is that characters and places will not be developed right away. I will take time with these things and you won't get huge lumps of backstory or information about people, places or things.Changes in writing style - I have written other things before, but this is my first full-length novel, so my writing style will change and develop as the novel progresses.P.S. I would really appreciate comments about which parts of the novel you enjoyed and which bits could be better. These kinds of comments will help me become a better writer, which will in turn make this a better novel. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the book!
Reincarnation stories have previously been drowned and drowned with the formula of "average protagonist getting nae nae'd by a truck/anything else" akin to an anime and then proceeds to get either OP, a harem on the way, level up systems, whatever. This novel thankfully attempts to avoid most of that. Reincarnation is still an outline here, but I appreciate all of the author's efforts of making the reincarnation unique, in this case, the protagonist becomes a sword. The only real criticism I had was the overall writing itself. I was bothered by the opening and the early chapters, where I understood what was going on but the overall pacing was just too fast. It gets better the more you read though. Also, might I say about the protagonist's name: Kylo? XP. I hope he's not related to Kylo Ren from Star Wars (just kidding XD)All in all, it's a simple but easy to understand read. There's enough in here to make you think "well, this is certainly different than most reincarnation novels."
İ have read many novels also most of the ones here as well yet this is the first review i am writing. İ have rarely seen anything worse than this story simply nothing happens , there are countless battles but no one dies except ordinary folks who apparently die in millions . Women are in the story just to be raped , there are guys who cultivate with their penis , and suddenly battles between cultivators are joined by war machines and moving battle cities that seem to jump from star wars and/ or chrome shelled regios , there is no map to what kind of cultivation methods people do use as suddenly someone who we never heard of before can come up and say well i cultivate this evil art and i can destroy half of your empire now and then he disappears for example , races and cultivators seem to pop up according to the daily mood of the writer rather than any kind of system and at last when i read the part where suddenly some cultivators from space came down with a space ship i stopped reading never to start again . Anyone who gives this garbadge of a novel a good rating is either paid by the writer or five years old.
I feel that this book is overlooked, it's really quite good. Sure there are some things that could be better. Such as the pacing being a little to fast, the spontaneous situation changes and what not. Considering not just everyone can write a good book, I think it's fair to say that this is better then a good bit.
This is a good story keep working hard ty author ....................................................................................................................