Is Author even alive cuz this story is very interesting and hope it continues i come back to this story every week to see if he posted any updates
The beginning of the novel ist very good. I am looking forward for more. (1524 8990 3563) (8271 0997 6263) ( Go Lotto!!)Biersuppe flys away!
What an intense beginning to a surely intense story. I loved the opening chapters and the build-up and tension they bring along, very hooking opening. The characters are also very interesting and the writing quality is superb. Looking forward to a lot more, would recommend it to everyone!!
I like this story a lot. You have great skills man. I hope you become successful and entertain us with many more stories.There are few mistakes here and there. If you can avoid them you will be nothing less of a professional. All the best.
The author is obsessed with *** with older women and while the novel was hard to read I wanted to give it a chance because a lot of novels improve after the initial chapters. However this one does not it doubles down on *** as its theme. Any potential the novel had suffers because of the authors obsession with ***. To make matters worse the author removes reviews trying to hide the novels real rating.
Now. In at not be TheStatsGuy or TheImmortalPotato, but I can tell you a few things.This is one of the most original and refreshing books I have ever had the pleasure of reading。So, take my word when I tell you that this book has everything a novice reader, or a bored pro can look for. You may not like it at first like I did, but just read 10 chapters in. I can gauruntee you will get hooked, I’ll bet 666 Spirit Stones on it.
Just read the futunari chao and its was samng wrong and the mc is bland that he just goes everywhere being evil withiiut a reason buy only a physic of seven sins to push the plot forward I mean I like your world plot your setting and every thing else but this stunt pulls it's down the drain son what next a whole Continent field with disease spreading futunari that while soon conquer the world all because he wants to be the only man to **** all the women in the world well guest what he ist cause they got dick 2 he's just being too childish that even the joker would laugh and 3 just read grasping evil learn what evill means with morals while still having a personality and 4 this chapter was wrong on all levels I hope u don't running hedonist sword god my d Still haven't recovered yet sign road to kingdom has giving me th is of feeling but never gave me this kind of ****..........,...............
I would say that this has potential but to the author maybe write longer chapters if possible and try to go mor in depth with the mc‘s personality and how he acts and I would love to see where you can take this story so keep it up -love you from Salty/Nocito/Atreeus ♥️
a very fun and action-packed story that is exactly what I wanted to read. the only qualm is the periodic lapse in updating, but they are completely understandable due to the author having a sperate life; and the troubles within said life.
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Just leaving a review to say thanks for author coming back!.Looking forward to where this goes.Overall as usual interesting start, just want to read till the end this time.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.