Jose6501
in the start in this novel MC is coward but letter it's gets better so it's good and story development also very good . I really want more chapter to come i just hope author don't put love and harem in it i like MC the way it's please focus on beasts rather then some stupid girls .
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I hope people would start writing a proper review or synopsis. Just to give the idea to new readers on what the story is. Most of the comments here barely reviewed about anything important.Okay... I know I contradicted myself by writing this, but I just had to point it out.
this book is amazing I've read all but like 2 of em and this is one of my favorites I really really hope you make more make it a daily cause I'll read it daily
Like all bodyguard genre novels, MC is lousy at bodyguarding waifus (2 digits worth of waifus gone comatose or kidnapped, gone missing MIA, got butchered into multiple bodyparts or soul dissipated.)MC is still virgin despite 7,000+ chapters and double digits waifu harem. As for the villains, MC doesn't get to kill them because of lame reasons (too lame to mention) and these villains (hundreds of them and counting) survive to join the Main Villain's not-so-secret organization (currently operated by Main Villain's waifu). Main Villain is currently trapped with MC's mentor and MC's ancestors/surviving family in the 4th dimension (hello physics?) in an eternal combat standoff.MC is schizo and inconsistent, doesn't have consistent stance against villains. MC doesn't kill the villains that should be killed because he's afraid of offending the villain's upper tier bosses who will in turn take revenge against his waifus, but said villains does bad stuff to his waifus anyway.MC decides to kill villains but ends up failing or triggering a massive backlash that hurts his waifus anyways.MC (or rather Author) has a gigantic ego because he spends like 100 words every chapter monologuing that he's superior to the villains (Author has Self-fulfillment issues).Author rewards MC for making the worst choices.Author causes too many plotholes and retcons stuff along the way.Dumb and Dumber. MC is dumb but villains are even dumber.Author resorts to depowering/resetting MC's cultivation progress to milk/spam chapters:01. MC reached a level where fights became boring and repetitive and author decided to take action to save his "falling ratings".02. So author came up with an idea to destroy MC's physical body in the lamest way possible while he was out astral projecting his Spiritual Form to complete a "not-so-important errand". You could say that MC deserved it because he left his physical body to an untrustworthy waifu-wannabe and her even more conniving family members.03. Thus causing MC's lifespan to start ticking down like a time bomb,as he is forced to use expend his remaining Spiritual Energy as fuel in the most masochistic way (author has to tell readers that is masochistic) to enact his revenge against his current list of never-ending enemies, preying on his new-waifus.04. With each use of Spiritual Energy, the stability of his Spiritual Form degrades and his cultivation level ends up dropping as well. 05. Author resorts to wasting 100-200 words to reiterate the fact that MC is running on borrowed-time every chapter from then on. 06. As if that wasn't enough, author teleports MC to a region where there is a total absence of divine chi/qi, so that MC can't replenish his Spiritual Energy and his lifespan degrades even faster.07. And after a few hundred chapters later, when MC finally reforms his physical body back (lame deus ex machina), MC gets resetted back to the 1st level of Cultivation.08. Because of the total absence of divine chi/qi, all of MC's former cultivation methods are rendered useless but MC has to recultivate from scratch.09. Author then makes MC spend 100-300 words on MC boasting (or whining) on about the past of how powerful he was in the past every chapter, without fail.10. Unfortunately, no matter how author tries to sell the creative "new combat moves" and "new cultivation methods" invented by MC with the absence of absence of divine chi/qi. It's just a lazy cut-and-paste and rehash of what author did a few thousands chapters ago. (Just replace the words "taking in divine chi/qi through the meridians" with "direct intake of the physical elemental essence into the flesh and bones")
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I am a real fan of this story. It has a unique setting and a cool protagonist, who isn't like many others cold-blooded from the start, but has history to back his character up. Additionally it has great emphasis on character development and focus on different types of arts (martial arts, etc.) which are used interesting and in his own ways. The protagonist is not born as "the strongest" or "the genius of this generation" and this had made a real interesting storyline happening. And it is also not a gloomy and only focusing on action type of story which would make it after a while boring, but also sometimes funny and has changing feelings (sometime relaxed, sometimes frustrating, sometimes funny)However there ARE amazing fights in which the protagonist not always wins.Overall this is one of my favorite stories on Webnovel and I can highly recommend this. And yes for many at first the protagonist and the story might seem lacking but these are filled in later in the story which is another point I like to add: everything is not shoved right at the beginning but proceeds through the story So a great thanks for the author for this amazing story (and sorry this is gotten so long ?)
And heres the spam review to get me to 10 reviews. Nice ?
It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.
The best sports novel i have read so far.. I put a 5 for all.. the only thing that could be a 4 is the world bg since it is just a regular modern setting, nothing creative. But i still love this one and my current favorite. More power author, thanks big time for bringing us this novel.
First of all ????for this book I just read it's second book (not so sure if it is) but this one is also amazing ❤️❤️❤️I mean it. It just so sad to know that Ryan will die in the end but still an interesring story???Kudos author
