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-Make yourself presentable to me.-
With no hesitation in her voice, she immediately responded to my request. She shot my proposal down in an instant. Again, a mouthful of wise words were thrown towards me. I couldn't understand how this woman was able to shot whatever I would say, down in an instant.
While I am a fan of the story and the author, the editing team seriously dropped the ball on this one. Consistently misspelling Mag-lev as meg-lev, misused words and blatant wrong words show that the editing team generally skimmed through with a spell-checker and did not check the grammar or word context. After that, they did not even read through their own work before posting their mess. The worst offense was in chapter 79, where they were retarded enough to not only screw up the same word three times on one page, they also ****ed up the spelling of the main character's name. THIS IS INEXCUSABLE.I'm done with reading this ****, might come back to it if they ever fix it. I don't like having to stop reading every other page on average to make a corrective notation. I realize that this is a completed book and is not currently being maintained. I wish to state that it is a terrible idea to leave it this way, when it could be made so much better with a little time and a good quality editor.
Duan Ling Tian’s heart felt warm.
The leader of the elites ordered with a vicious smile.
Obligatory and shameless author review. Thank you all for reading.
Really enjoyed reading. I like the character
Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!
I m giving 5/5 star for this novel.. .it's really well return while the character development is superb... The way it shows his emotions, fear while he still want to survive in a unknown place is making it more thrilling..... It easy to understandable which make it intresting
Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️
I just want to say that i'm thankfull to the autor, it's a great novel up to 60 somthing, the chapter i am, i would like to know more about the world built, but i also like to get to know things at the same time the mc does, so keep up the good work, thanks to your novel i'll try other originals