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The book is a good one and I have to say that I'm impressed with it. Good one author.
Author pls tell me he's not going to do that stupid quests!!!!!!!Good story but you have been interchanging pronouns.Good work by the way
Looking Good So far and Hope it continues the paceAnd I know It's gonna be yet another good read bcz It's Author is None other than Our Villain obsessed A4kl-Kun.So let's Begin our Journey.
I just read the sypnosis and the work seems interesting to me, I can't wait to start
Interesting plot, looking forward for more updates
grammar makes it a little difficult, but you can make out what it should say. also, the grandpa is gross.... I'm not sure I will keep on reading this one.
So I've actually gotten to chapter 20 and there hasn't been any update on the chapters so farI'm still eagerly awaiting the remaining chapters.
I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it!
I enjoyed reading this story, I like this story especially characteristics of the characters thank you author for making this story
I just realized I read this novel without making an account...ANYWAYS...I am enjoying this novel so far. My only real gripe is how the simple actions are extremely descriptive, which may be seen as a good or bad thing. I think it takes away from how amazing the fights are (I've read up to chapter 10). I hope there could be a spinoff series with one of the first side characters such as Lord Fujita or Hikari. Keep up the good work.
Shameless review here by this author... don't have much experience with writing so bear with me for a while... however I can promise you that this novel will get better. In summary the novel is about Erindor Thorne , a young pathetic weak man who obtains an artifact that helps him to rise to the peak of his universe.....thanks for sticking around...!...
Author san does warn you to read this at your own risk as their novel is not perfect. To clarify, the writing is peppered with irritating grammatical errors; for example a consistent lack of capital letters at the beginning of many sentences and even some of the proper nouns. There are other problems with syntax that would make readers who appreciate grammatically sound writing find this narrative bothersome. I wanted to edit it more than read it ? It’s a shame given that the plot sounded interesting and you can see the potential of the story.
