ShivamThakur1883
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Really like the story. Still only around 20 chapters, but it's still so good. Like the mc and his strength development. So its a new and very interesting story on this site.
Please no Harem. As long as it's not a Harem, I'll like it at this point! Most Empress novels are Harem but I hope I'm wrong about this one. Looks interesting. I don't know how the Empress became a System though...
This is the best Chinese science fiction novel out there, and it's not even supposed to be science fiction! The world building is 10 out of 10.
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My Beloved readers.From the bottom of my heart I apologize for this message but I am no longer going to keep updating my book.It is a bittersweet decision but one that I must make. Between working three jobs, heavy criticism, lack of motivatIon and trying to find sleep, I Have no time to write or update the book.I am so sorry To any one who actually liked the story. SPOILER ALERTTo give closure to like that one fan of my book I will share with you what I had planned.Em and Ventus would reunite and defend against the mini War force trying to attack sulpaWith all 5 of Quinn’s Disciples dead, the constraints on her true and most powerful follower. He was going to wreck everyone as He was madly in love with quinn and would take everyone out in her name. Through the combined efforts of Lakia, Phinn, Sam, Em, Ven, and SB they would overcome and move to fight Quinn.She tried to wreck them but they whoop her And Em deals the final blow. [Insert Story]Fate dies some how…Had not spent much Time since she was my least fav.Xavier comes in just to stomp on everyone,Phinn is mad because Xavier is abusing his daughter.He gets killed by Xavier but not before entrusting her to Em.Em gets a power boost and all his old abilities back when he gets his soul back.Our heros move to 99th floor determined to kill the final king.They get wrecked.SB sacrifices himself to Save Em and Ven by transcending into the Great Slime God Sir Blob.Round 2 with xavier happens and they overcome him.In a dark twist, the great evil manifests and defeats the Master Of Shadows, opening up the door straight to floor 100.Em and Ven goOnly to realize that the final ones to kill are this great Evil Who not only took over the body of the forgotten champion but also corrupted Autumn.After an epic fight everyone dies leaving Em alone and with a choice. He can go home to earth and Leave behind everything he fought against and Betray the memories of those who entrusted salvation to him or he can pick up the Mantel of the great evil and start the cycle again just as he had done so in order for a better outcome.(He was the evil all along whaaaaaaaat)Anyway lame story sorry to have made you read it.
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It's like a badly written version of RSSG. The MC is supposed to be the battle emperor, but he plays like a total newbie, making bad decisions left and right. The game has also just started, yet theres huge guilds with leatherworkers and blacksmiths somehow supplying their armies with full 'bronze level' armor, allowing them to clear out entire leveling zones? Riiiight... This is something that should happen weeks or months later, not on Day 1.Overall, a terrible read.
If you are going to only Skim this Review, then I'll tell you it is a ok story quality-wise, but it is a very fun story. Even though this is a story based around a mmorpg, the author did not think too deeply how mmorpgs work as a game and just used game elements to create story *******. Like how losing a level upon character death is used to create stakes and consequences for the players about to do a risky plays which is compounded as higher levels become very grind heavy. You can see how this would make fights more tense when the odds are against the heroes and death in a game substantial but not fatal. However, when viewed as a game, this mechanic is incredible harsh and not player friendly with how easy it is to die in this game. When you die, you lose the level, the stats that came with it, any skills that unlock on those levels and all proficiency with said skills, and maybe an equipment piece you had now free for anyone to take. These are very powerful reason to not die for a story character, but as a random player, this death penalty will kill alot of player interest. Now if you can ignore all of the game stuff as a possible game and just take those at face value, then you can focus on the best parts. The characters. Alot of main characters are quirky and memorable which leads to alot of fun interactions and situations. I could talk about them in more depth like with the game problems but that will ruin the fun.TL;DR: Story about a bad mmorpg with funny and enjoyable main characters.
The translation quality is overall good while I really like the story and the pace it travels on. The main thing is that I hope I could find more chapters soon.
I just cannot understand why they would effectively make the novel unreadable after finishing it... No one is going to spend $1000+ to read this and this is just pushing people to pirate sites instead of supporting the site.
