The best of stories here by this author. I love the 'prince of paris' thief concept with a mystery and rescue vibe. I loved it. Read it on another site.
This book, this is truly a rare but good find in this website. The author's writing style is unique, one cannot resist the urge to pity the main character. The first chapter, I was touched by it. I could feel what the main character feels, giving me a hint that the author has skills when it comes to descriptions since they are vivid and unique.Bayanihan, ah, I felt proud to be a Filipino after reading the second chapter. I love how you've included one of our good traits as citizens of our country. The story is somehow relatable for some because it is true, a lot of people are experiencing poverty right now while the rich thrive. I am amazed that the author wrote a novel like this. I am touched by it.Sorry for the late review, it's father's day today so I'm quite busy. Keep up the good work and never ever drop this novel for its potential is great. I wish you the very best, and as one of your readers, I do encourage other readers to read this novel. You won't regret it.
you will not be disappointed with this.This is probably one of the most realistic football novels you can get
I love this book overall as a whole. Really I like all of the characters except one. the main female they made her too stupid. She really took the whole "dumb blonde" to heart. other than that I love the book. wish that we could get another book in the same universe. Maybe something with Samuel maybe five hundred or a thousand years later or something that would be awesome.
I didn't like the MC's development and the general direction the story was going was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo disappointing
Only book that I have bothered to reviews from the many read on this site. Satisfying characters, and the author actually has enough mastery of language that it doesn’t hurt to to read or seem like paragraphs are repeating - which other novels certainly do. Highly recommended
This is my first chinese novel that have a yuri read so please make this story continue
Good author... if your novel only had as a reason as a hobby of yours, then without a doubt I would be encouraging you with this peculiar system that you present, after all you don't see many novels with that kind of premise.However, author..., when I saw you compete in the WSA 2022, then it is really questionable what theme you chose for your system, and not because it is a sin to write Simp stuff. If not to the type of audience that is going to be addressed, without further exaggeration, and many readers will not give your novel a chance, just because it has the title Simp.Then, in chapters 1 and 8, it is more than enough for several readers to abandon the novel, and even I felt uncomfortable in chapter 8. The reason was the interaction of Jack and Mary, their thoughts and actions do not match, not they are grounded and feel compelled for a later plot to follow. Then if I have to guess later Mary will regret it and then Jack will slap him with a reality that no longer needs her ("Sigh, that theme is already more than reused by several authors"), and with that I'm not saying that I forgive her; however, the previously established relationship is a headache for many readers.Now the question of characters we have a protagonist without self-esteem, with an inflated ego, Mary the typical naive heroine who later becomes the intriguing villain, Lucy the opportunistic girl, and in itself a large majority of readers will repudiate that type of background for your characters.Well author with that being said, unfortunately your premise is already doomed, as long as you can win, I just know that it will take extraordinary effort to make the Simp system enjoyable to read.Honestly, I wanted to rate this story 3 stars, but then I remembered that it's too early to give a review; however, I felt the need to write this, so in the form of support I decided to leave it 3.6, now I recommend reading it, well if you are a tolerant and calm person you may give it a try, but if you lack those two, then no, because you will take a bitter experience in these early chapters.As soon as all this is said, it's my personal opinion and if I'm wrong, just let me know in the answers section, I don't mean to offend anyone and all that, and good luck author with the competition.
This review is made to counteract that one guy leaving fifty 0 star reviews. 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star5 star 5 star 5 star 5star 5 star 5 star 5 star
This novel is great until the 5th Volume started.Writing Style: 4/5The author is fluent in English, though occasionally making typos here and there. He has a good writing style, not seeming to break the immersion. My only real problem is the paragraph structure wherein paragraphs get too long.World Background: 4/5Background is great and well thought out. My only surprise is the mention of Mana reservoirs, seemingly unfitting for a life in modern society. There are also some inconsistencies in the world building here and there.Character: 3/5The characters would have been a 4/5 if not for Volume 5. Each character has their own unique personality. Though some like Noah were introduced abruptly, this was at the beginning segments. One character that was special was Luna. She was one of the genuinely interesting characters. She unlike the other girls had a genuine affinity with the MC. Unfortunately, the author decided to separate her in the name of Character Progression, which I disagree with. If not for what the author decided to make her do in Volume 4 and what was evident during Volume 5, I would have rated this a 4 or even a 5.Story: 2/5Same problems with the Characters segment. Vol 1 was consistent while Vol 2 was amazing. The ending was great. Honestly, the story could've ended there with my review on this with 4 for chara, 5 for story and even 5 for world, since inconsistencies started with Vol 4. Unfortunately, the author didn't seem to know that everything wouldn't change with 1 conversation. But it did and now the joy of reading this story is lost.All in all, I'm dropping. The story doesn't have a lot of clichés but because of that, the story gets unnatural in parts where clichés naturally occur. I hope the author learns from this review.
It is an overpowered protagonist story but the author manages to keep the story interesting,unlike all the other OP protagonist story’s, keep up the good work work authur.
Well, the main character is actually quite cool with indifferent nature amd deep feeling. I think his ambition shows that he wants to be recognized. But we dont know yet.