ShuangWeioRe
this work could've been one of the best novels on webnovel, the story is really good all the way through. There is one thing holding it back tho.the ending, without spoiling anything, the ending is quite possibly the worst I've ever seen. So my recommendation is to read to chapter 1000 and leave.
why author drop this novel .......
A question a lot of people ask everywhere, NO HAREM.Im surprised this novel is not more popular. I saw a lot of reviews from like first 20 chapters complaining, dont know why bother writing a review if you read the first page of a book.Writing quality is solid, maybe a typo once a few chapters if even that. Vocabulary usage is varied which was nice.Dont know much about updates since i got the novel when it was finished so just 5/5 i guess. Barely any bloat or padding anywhere, which is really rare for a system novel.Story developed in a good pace, slower at start where smallest things had chapters, to mid point where repetitive fights started to get summarized, and at the end solo trainings were summarized.Characters were designed well, characters grew, including side characters. Characteristics were reasonable and made sense. Story didnt focus too much on side characters, but enough to get a feeling they existed and were more than 1 dimensional things.World background seemed solid, only thing i didnt like was bunch of references to the odyssey of a blind god or whatever dude who appeared a few times, so not giving a full score. It is a neat idea to intertwine novels, just not for me personally.I'd like to give 4.9, but it is what it is. I do Recommend if a novel with a lighter flavored system is there, No harem, no padding and overall good stuff.
okay I loved this book until these two chapters now I am disappointed more heartbreak for an already heartbroken woman wow
this is way too interesting...love love love it ...️
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The storyline was great. Every chapter kept me intrigued and keen to read more to find out what would happen next. Easy to read. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing! Thank you ❤️
This booooook!!!! I can't get enough. If I could give it 10 stars I would. The Author is absolutely amazing. This book gives you everything and more. If your not ready to cry, get angry, and fall in love with characters then this book isn't for you.
Totally in love!!
this is one of the best books i have read. I love the while serie. can't want for more
what happened to your book to stepfather with benefits it says it was deleted
The best read on here by far!!!
