try writing a better summary as the current one is too vague and uninteresting ..
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"The wind whispered secrets in my ear." And I just had to check it out cause the cover was giving historical.... It wasn't a waste of time? it like I am reading a poem in a novel,very nice
Such a good novel! I love the female lead not staying as damsel in distress but takes the initiative to put fate into her own hands. and the male lead sounds so attractive.I recommend
Why doesn't he care about information security,I'm tired of him just letting other kingdoms steal his stuff, he complains about it but doesn't event think of anti espionage,it's frustrating to know that there are many spies there and nobody cares
Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter...Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter.................Stability of updates, sense the novel has just started, no comment. but sense each chapter is about 300-500? words and he wrote 6 total 2/3 chapters a week? that is extremely slow.... story development.. It might be there, but I cant really understand what im reading, so you get a 3Character design... I thought your MC was a talking bird, somehow you made him less interesting to me... two poor kids, which no goal or objective, its pretty empty---- I made the same mistake.World Background-- its a bit to early and his chapters are too small. id give him a 4 sense, I see signs of it being thought out.
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The world structure of the story is very broad, and it keeps me invested in the story as I read. The writing quality is fine so far, and the development continues to immerse me.
great story plus the brutal character of MC is necessary for the violent set-up of the story..although the mc doesnt care much about gender is also necessary because in a world where trust is britle or fragile..trusting other character would be risky...so i think the author really made a reasonable MC for being brutal....i hope the author would release few chapters at a time
One of the best originals I've read so far. Readers who's into xianxia/wuxia will be in on a surprise. Love the concept, development, background and update speed. As a writer myself, I'm very impressed with how much the author can write while maintaining quality chapters. Salute to you bro!
I love fantasy and the involvement of fairies and elves and royalties. I know it's kind of cliché since it has been quiet so many years since fairytales have been around but somehow, I am entertained by this story. It's a classical story for me but it's still good. Hope to read it to its end.
So happy. I'm loving this story. Thank you author. They finally met and are so going to give us so much drama???????????????????????????????????