A really good novel, with an engaging MC and good supporting characters. I'm really enjoying it! Looking forward to more chapters
this is the only novel ive read on here where you can spend over 100 coins on 3 chapters, and thats the worst thing about it.
As the author... I kind of have to give this a 5 right? Call it biased rating, call it an attempt to increase my own rating. But of course... We all have to believe in our own works. For if we don't take pride in what we do... Why bother doing it?
It is very hard to write about time and space, so not many authors are brave enough to do it. I give you props for tryingPros: The premis is good and the story is moving along.Cons:The characters are flat and have no enotions. They are about to fly on a large eagle and his 2 companions close their eyes to sleep? Where is the awe, excitement, fear? this already was a red flag about how the book was written.They get to the city and he already knows what the statue’s name is? There needs to be a bit of mystery and character interaction were he find out who it is.You need stop giving the main character everything because it’s unbelievable.This book is probably good for begining readers but for readers like me who have hundreds of hours reading, this book is too simple with no twists and turns, no excitement.
Yes this is a Good book... it has non cliche charcters and a interesting world here whIch is a rare thing here on webnovel at least from my experience but Yeah this novel really deserves way more attention than what it’s receiving right now and well it will be a terrible shame for it to not be picked.
I think that the story will be interesting... Can't wait to see what awaits the young Oliver! I hope that the story won't be too predictable and that the characters will be complex.
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Love It so far, more chapter plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .......................... plenty more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................
don't give up author. post daily. that way people will come to understand this.
The story plot is quite amazing and fascinating. You can feel something the moment you start reading it. The background is well described. Good work! Keep it up!
I read till chapter 10. I am really fed up with this guy's naive hypocritical thoughts. I don't think a hero needs to save people freely. soldiers fought for countries and take money in return. these make them bad people?? no they are real heroes guarding the border so that we can sleep in peace. please someone tell me will mc's naive mentality changes or he will remain like this in the future. if mc's mentally changes for the better, I will continue with the novel. if not, I will drop right now.. time is precious
A bizarre mix of White Wolf style magical realism, dimension-hopping fantasy, and cultivation novel that somehow works because of the lively prose and lovable characters. I'm not big into Xianxia stuff but this story has more than enough on offer to appeal to people outside that genre's usual readership.