The 12th Kiss

I liked the way he started the story, namely with the fact that he played the game, and then got to an unknown place, especially the end of the first chapter is quite intriguing, in general I think the plot will be interesting, as well as the development of the world.

Writing as of chapter 8: The story development and world background is slowly building up and his interesting to see.  The characters interactions are interesting and feel real. There is a nice twist to the tower, dungeon genre as the MC isn't the only one reincarnating. It seems to hold potential. I might update this review as I continue reading it!

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As a Master's (Top 500) League of Legends player in Season 8, I would think I have an edge over other readers in this certain type of genre, so here are my two cents on the novel.The novel itself is great, I thoroughly enjoyed each of the chapters. Good writing along with good pacing makes the story an interesting read. It has decent enough characters and game backstory to make it enjoyable.The story does seem unrealistic to a certain sense. I think a good MOBA story boils down to how much the author itself understands the genre of MOBA's. Although he does explain the basic nitty-gritty of game mechanics, he fails to mention any important or groundbreaking that players with more skill would notice, and that will have an effect on how far the novel can progress linearly.It's fine since these guys are middle schoolers and are still learning about the game, but if he wants to bring this novel from a lighthearted read to an actual quality MOBA novel, it's going to take a lot of work. Overall, still a good read. There's no other MOBA novel to compare this to, so I guess it is a staple. There are things that could be improved, but the things the author does writes, he does correctly.

「Excuse me, Lily. Do you want to eat monster fruits? 」