idk but the story is too fast, the system is so confusing and not too detail about the skill. psychologically speaking I think you disregard the parent condition coz a three years old is missing, i know they know that their child is in his master but you destroy the relationship between parent and child psychologically speaking. the story is already a mess and the plot is straight forward without twist. at early story you made him almost godlike.
Nice synopsis dear Author... it's quite simple yet so captivating. We all as writers have our own writing styles and techniques that can hook our readers yeah????Everything is on point, and I love how you decribe your scenes. Keep it up and you'll earn a fortune ???
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Really nice story. Just confused, is it Harem or not. but that makes it fun....I think the MC is growing as a character, some scenes are not 'realistic' but then again the guy did take over a new body, who am I to complain.Grammar can be better but overall really enjoyable read
Love the novel it’s a different and I love the army building. The update is nice for a new novel. Keep up the good work!!!??? Don’t drop!!!?????
the story is good but why do it take so long for the next ch I waited a year and only 10 ch came out if u want to take my money I need more to read if not I'm judt going to find something else to unlock
This work is yet another amazing novel of Awe's and it shows. This novel is as exciting and enticing as his other novels, maybe even more so. The writing is fluid, easy to understand and extremely vivid, each scene or fight is very well defined and it's pace is not too fast, nor too slow.The story development is arguably slow, but there is no moment in which you will be bored with just fillers.The character design is good, the author perfectly describes the feeling and emotional state the MC goes through, making it easy to relate. As for the other characters, they are also well defined, each with it's own personality and motivations.As for the world development and background, Awe didn't spent a lot of time on it, and it unfortunately shows, but to be frank the world building doesn't have to be excellent.
update please
I find the males here to be really pathetic no one soulfully loves their partners otherwise they won't do what they have done even if Louis lost his memories but heart and soul how could he just gave in without waiting for his proper recovery and rest they have their mind and memories intact
Really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
more update please, at least 10 chapter a dax
ok ok ok.....I need more more more.lol...I'm loving this read.