I've read almost all chapters now and currently am at chapter 111. I finally decided to do a review, since I have some things to criticize. And although I wanna point out those mistakes and let it look like I don't like the story, I definitely recommend it.1. Writing Quality (3 stars): I hesitated, because I actually wanted to give this 2 stars, but decided on 3 stars at last. Firstly, I hope I'm speaking here for other readers too, I want to point out the arrangement of special characters. The author writes for example xxx , xxx. I think this somehow breaks the "flow" I'm in when I'm reading. I'd rather have it like xxx, xxx, since there's no gap between the first word and the comma. When he's introducing new cities and rivers, etc., he writes ' xxx '. I think that it's the same as before and should be 'xxx'.It's a similar case with the direct speech, as he places gaps between the word the : and the " and the next word. I think it should be written xxx: "xxx.Secondly, there's a thing I've recently noticed which is that the author capitalized the word ill in the middle of the sentence. Sometimes even names are written in completely lowercase letters.Thirdly, the overall grammar is a bit bad and I sometimes need to correct it myself, because otherwise I wouldn't understand what it means.2. Story Development (4 stars): I like the development of the various characters, since it's pretty solid. However, I believe that the author made it unrealistic. Ronan, having a 9 star talent, should be much more capable than his brother Percy who has a 6.5 star talent. Ronan has the best talent one can possess and can't reach Percy. Though I can understand the fact that Percy wants to be stronger than Ronan as long as possible, the latter also pushes himself, because he wants to surpass the former.Another thing is that while Ronan was inside the cave of penance, Percy didn't train and as they both meet they're suddenly the same level?For me, the most powerful talent should be much more superior to a 6.5 one.3. Character Design (5 stars): Though the explanation on how the characters look isn't really that detailed, I don't have any complaints.4. Updating Stability (4 stars): He regularly upholds his stability, but sometimes doesn't upload a chapter. Though that is indeed the case, I can understand his struggle and don't blame him.5. World background (5 stars): The world background is being told by the author and I got no complaints about it. It probably is the best category here and is very detailed compared to them.I hope my opinion helps others and was interesting to read. Before I tell you goodbye, let me say it again: I do recommend this book despite all these "mistakes".
One of better original novels on the site. It 's been a good story so far and just starting to get interesting. As always hoping for more regular updates to keep up the interest.
after reading chapter 1 to 17,if your looking for an anti-hero or smart and decisive mc that will do anything for achieving his goals then try this one you will not regret it.
Nothing worse than a system with personality. The MC is forced into situations and cant make his own decisions, garbage. To make matters worse he is even special as there are other people with systems and multiple lives, so this is a story about who has more luck and forced plot.
Do you happen to know the original name of Tamer Simulation: I Can Check The Life Script? …....................Thank you for the translation.
Super slow pacing that is actually a little annoying, when she gets to the shadow realm she basically stay in a cave cooking for 5 chapters.. MC seems to lack character development and the story barely moved on, I dont see any development in 50 chapter, seems like you are trying to drag things out because those 50 chapters could easily have been 20 since there is basically nothing in it, neither introduction, plot development, or character development.. Well I guess there is barely a little of friendship and such..
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Shameless five star rating, but I know my work is good :)Have a look at it and judge by yourself though, don't take my word for it. If you enjoy it, add it to your library, drop some power stones, and leave a review!
Chapter 171 onwards translation takes a big nosedive. Seems like they give up on translating and used machine translation but it's worse then the mtl sites out there.
It's getting worse.... I stop reading this ! Until ch100+.. another good story turning into Waste ?? .. ........................................................ .................................
Isn't the premise almost exactly like Danmachi? With how both Bell and Ye Bing were rejected from 50 Gods/Goddesses and Sects respectively? But, forgive me. Comparing this trash with Danmachi is an insult to that masterpiece. This is just a fanfiction at this point. Also, I hate liars and deceivers, this will get 1 Star.
You need to be aware before reading this that it is a very low brow comedy. This best way I can describe this is "A wannabe Marx brother clone does Xianxia" or something like that. For some reason I was expecting a normally intelligent MC forced or tricked into taking a somewhat broken or difficult system and working through the comedic problems in order to transform it onto a somewhat OP system. What I got was totally different. Sorry I don't consider constant ludicrous stupidity as funny nor do I classify it as comedy. Since this is only about stupidity, I find it to be just that, stupid. However I have to say, if you enjoy that sort of thing then you will probably find this to be absolutely hilarious and I highly recommend this to you. In that case you should consider this a 5-star review. If you have a low tolerance for abject stupidity then stay far away from this. Since I am in this category, my personal rating is less than 1-star and my advice is avoid at all costs. What experience you have will depend upon what direction your sense of humor heads in.