This is a pretty well written and enjoyable book.I’ve read several “system” novels and this one is probably in my top 5 just because of the realistic dialogue between the protagonist and the system.There’s a little bit of questionable character development regarding certain side characters but nothing that takes away from the content.Author also does well with handling properly given criticism and communicates well at the moment. (10/2/18)Will update if necessary.
For now, Very original and interesting engrossing. I skimmed through the prologue, but the chapters after that were extremly engaging.
Can't wait for more.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Three keywords: Opium, Cocaine and Marijuana. People think that in a war, sowing and reaping for lunch is the rule. Is not. After the first battle, soldiers spend more time wanting to flee the next battle than anything else.
Great chapter and I hope your mom comes out ok, my one piece of constructive criticism is that the new rave needed a bit of foreshadowing since it felt like it came out of left field.
The book is just starting and it's already wonderful, I'm expecting much, so please don't disappoint me on this one too. You know what we like.
Third book in the series, despite it’s brevity I liked it quite a bit.Jake is the “edgiest” of the three heroes but somehow as the edgiest he’s better at friends then Leon and Ryan. I thought that was amusing.I’m sad it’s over already but I’m hoping we get to see a book 4 sometime. As a note for the author, working on reducing some your crutch phrases like “in the end” might be a good idea.Also a one chapter epilogue is kind of a bummer.
It's a good novel ... then they put the spirit stones for every chapter.....well time to drop it @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
dropping this rate because author deserve it.
I've read till Chapter- 3.7 and I have enjoyed so far. Will continue reading. I have given you 4.8 stars just because of the updating stability. I know you are keeping busy but try to update at least 2 chapters in a week. That would be easier for readers to remember what happened in the last chapter and we don't have to read it again and again. Overall it's a really good novel. Adding it to the library right away.
A Villaines Female Lead??! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'M IN! Please, do not drop this novel, dear author.
I dont even know where to begin. It starts fairly well. Even with all the cliches it was still good and palatable. But as time went on, the MC became more and more unbearable. He starts out a cunning smart guy, but by chapter 80 he is an idiot and constantly scared of everything. It is disappointing to see him become that way for the sake of comedy. At least, I hope it was comedy, because if it wasnt then it was straight up atrocious.