TL;DR: It’s bad.The story is bad but the bad translation makes it even worse. The main character is also pretty stupid and other characters are also unrealistic. Futhermore the main character’s attitude towards other countries makes me believe the story will get racist in the future.Let’s start with my first problem. Why is the prettiest and smartest girl in class suddenly defending him despite having no relation prior? The main character even says they never had much to do with each other so why?She even chooses to risk her future to go to the same world for him. Obviously with more people going to the same world the more competition there would be. Yet she still chooses to follow him even after he ignores her act of kindness to resolve the grudge between him and a young master.He states publicly that he’ll ruin the young master and his family despite having nothing to do so (didn’t have his overpowered system yet). Seeing this, I had already see the massive plot armor he’ll have to save him from his stupidity.The body he reincarnates into is broke and his girlfriend is just ditching him. Yet he shaves and becomes a massive hunk immediately attracting a bunch of girls. They state he’s hotter than some models so why couldn’t the body’s owner be one? We’re given no further information of his previous life before he powers up to the strongest person on the planet in a second. It’s like the poor circumstances weren’t even there.The young master holding a grudge on the main character for 10 years is also pretty stupid. You’d think he’d get smarter being in a large family for 10 years. He apparently made his family stronger and is also stated to be cunning. His actions really don’t show that though.
Don't get your hopes up. This gem is hollow inside and here is why. I have read it entirely. 500 hundred chapters of awesomeness and then it spiraled into never ending repeating similar sentences, situations, tropes and same mold forgettable useless characters. 1.Romance is extremely badly incorporated into the story. Doesn't help when the main girl is nothing but a bland puppet with no personality used to move the plot. 2. MC goal ends to be with each next arc to get stronger and to create waves, one bigger than the other, his reputation MUST be illustrious. 3.He is the chief of lucky - 7-chosen lottery, everything of benefit comes handily to him just because. 4.Others exist to be impressed and to worship him. 5.Action chapters later are waving sleeves and all powerful snorting and many things that don't make sense. 6.Mc personality explained over and over again as so good and scholarly like, but his actions are in fact the exact 180. 7.Translator gripe- the repeated CAPS monologues are not the least bit shocking or interesting. It was the best story for me up to when he gets at Yuanyung stage. I realised after a few arcs that Author got run out of ideas and the story got noticeably bad. I think it as Overwhelmingly underwhelming story, because close to 1/3 of it was really awesome,even thought it had many problems whixh the story made up for, but overall my hope got crushed and I just read it to pass time, but it's really horrible.
this is a waste of time,by that I mean reading it and having to type 140 characters, it's likely that I've put more braincells together for this than the author put in writing the plot.
The protagonist is lame as f .he becomes a monster trainer to revive his dead parents a lod of BS ,he is described as a cold person who don't put his nose in other people's business and next moment he trolls some random minor because he fcuking can .his naming sense is dumb and becomes unbearable in future .and what is this green hat joke I know what it means but come in they just stretch it too far do no one wears green hats in China dumb novel trash novel cardboard characters useless faceslapping .
for all those that hate harem, this novel is harem.. i didnt read much becuz of that but thats all i gotta say…………………. so yea time to fill up space.
I have read this novel up to about 120 chapters in Chinese. And miraculously, there are no racists here. They should choose this novel if they have eyes!
Hasta donde yo he leído es una novela, mucho mejor que otras. Así que espero que no la abandonen por que tiene mucho potencial para ser una gran novela
Lame i just wasted my money for such a lame ending
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It was one of the best novel I've ever read. The character building is excellent. Every support characters has his/her own personality. It is also funny sometimes but not cheap. I highly recommend it.
I like the plot It kinda reflects on my personality so I'm going to wait for more update in the future I wanna see what going to happened on the future cant wait please update more
REVIEWHello, I’m the author of this book and I’m leaving my review after 100 chapters.I'll like to start by apologising to the readers who had been following the book from the start for my longer than expected hiatus.This will be a little more than a review, as I will be leaving all my thoughts and plans for the book. This will allow everyone to understand the path I’ve envisioned for the book going forward.Ideally, I wanted to arrange my points into pros and cons but I know that pros and cons are subjective. So, I’ll be leaving it to each person to decide what is a pro and a con.-Although the story is primarily about a group of soldiers with super abilities, it will be more than just the average shooting, fighting and killing you would probably be expecting from the genre. A lot of wits will be employed by various characters; a lot of planning will go into the execution of their plans, etc.-The story will subtly touch upon many different issues including political and socio-economic issues.-It will try to avoid being as nationalistic as possible so that we can all enjoy the personalities of the characters. It will neither discriminate nor promote any group over another. Everything will come from the outlook of the characters involved.-The special abilities of the character will not define them; instead, it will only be another tool in their toolbox. As a reader, characters who are defined by or totally dependent on their abilities sometimes put me off; take away their abilities and they become useless. I’m not saying it’s good or bad, just that personally I don’t like it hence I don’t want characters in my book to end up as such.-If everything goes according to plan, the story will be long. Perhaps very long. It might also come off as slow-paced.-Aside from the main military genre, I plan to explore many other genres as required to make the story as realistic and relatable as possible within the confines of fantasy fiction. -I plan to avoid many clichés. Hopefully, I can. I’m not ignorant of the fact that some clichés are unavoidable, perhaps even necessary.-The overall mood of the story will be serious, sometimes dark. I'll be including any deliberate comedy. If there is, it will be subtly and be brought about by the interaction of characters based on their personalities. There will be very dark elements, a bit of gore, unpalatable ideologies and things like that. I may try to downplay them though. In addition, I will give a warning before such events. However, they will be present as they are a part of the story so I want to inform you beforehand.-It should be obvious by now that I have a lot of ambitions for the book, even I am not sure of how much I can achieve. It's a passion work that I've put a lot of time into planning. How much I can achieve will depend on my knowledge and writing experience. I’ll be frank. I have zero prior experience in any art; talk less of writing. I’m learning as I go. Therefore, mistakes are unavoidable. I hope as I increase in experience and proficiency, these mistakes will reduce or be eliminated. That said I’m completely open to constructive criticism. I’m no stranger to the fact that the truth hurts but it’s also necessary for growth. So, please don’t hesitate to share your views with me. You can leave a comment or review. Depending on the success of the book and interactions from readers, I might create a discord channel for better interaction. All in all, I hope you give the book a try. I’m confident you’ll be hooked.