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love this story please continue it i would love to read more
I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out
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Good novel, but I drooped it at chapter 20.That FuT@ thing came out of nowhere, no prior warning was given, there's no tag, review or warning.I hope this review will help those who have FuT@ fetish to dive in, and those who don't have to stay away from this.I felt clickbaited; if I have found some warning I won't have wasted my time,,,,( If the FUT@(A) word written, the review became soft banned)
So far this story seems to be leading the reader into its world by filling the reader with such detailed information. It is extremely fascinating keep up the work!!!!!!!!
I read the first few chapters of the novel and liked it a lot and until now my interest is still there. you are doing a good job and don't give up. looking forward to more chapters
I really liked how I wrote each word. I have dedicated a lot to this work.On the other hand, it is an original novel without copies or inspiration in others. This was all part of a dream I had.
Uh not a very proper review but I'll try. ((I have read up to chapter 23)).At first, it starts good, but then the mc kinda becomes overpowered I guess. The characters are pretty 1 dimensional. The system isn't really that cheat-like from what I've seen because if the mc isn't aware of something, it isn't shown in the system so it feels like instead of the system being a golden finger for the mc, it's more like the system is a manifestation of his subconscious and biconscious, which also aids his evolution.I like how he gets some pets, but too many pets make them feel less special. The fact that mc is reluctant to kill humans but beat animals into submission, doesn't leave the best taste in my mouth considering the mc described humans as xenophobic when he himself wishes to avoid killing humans to the point where he uses up Evo points to make a whole freaking skill.His innate powers like life essence in his roots, soul nurturing, and other stuff makes me wonder if the other willows were to cultivate wouldn't they also have some of those properties? Because there isn't really a proper explanation, he just kinda has it. Would make sense if mc discovers some type of energy, condenses some nutrients in his roots, or absorbs some souls and refines them, giving him some sort of soul property. But no, he just somehow has them and it is attributed to him having a system?Also about that system part, after he finds out about his life essence condensation attribute, it finally shows up on the system but why is it that he knows about the fox? The spirit and the names of the two village girls? It would make sense if that was more explained as mc himself said that it won't show on the system panel if he doesn't know the name..That was structured weird ah, sorry.Apparently the raw is 从柳树开始进化 but it's different. I myself dislike it because though the mc starts off a willow tree he doesn't get to stay like that and gains a human form early on. so yeah, if you like the plant mc where they photosynthesize and stuff then I don't really recommend the raw..Oh heck that was long I-
Nice read ! Go try it if you like a more logical approach tu cultivation.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I like the book, the author has a good point, and I must say, you would like it too if you give it a try.So therefore, I highly recommend this book, and assure whosoever is reading this that he /she would like it too
It’s a nice book but come on man a simple match can take at least 10 chapters why the annoying part is even the matches he doesn’t participate in take about 7 chapters You are just wording your shit so you can get more chapters for your novelAs at 300 chapters nothing significant has happened in the story mind you it’s not that it’s a slow story it’s just that it’s at a normal pace but author just can’t summarize a simple scenario but tend to increase his wordings so that he can gain more chapters A single match can take 15 chapters alone why what at all are you trying to right hereRead greatest of all time ans see how the author summarizes most of his writings
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at
