The Abyss Keeper: Path of Balance

It's hard to read. It was good at first but the Mc became the slave to the system. His increase in realm is so pointless. He can just buy his product and increase but the system makes him do task for it. Second thing is, it is far from good. So many error in grammar and spelling. Compare to any store novel, I can barely finish it. Mc has no real Power. The system is stupid. Many can just kill the Mc while he is out of his shop. His products are still the same and the system wants to earn millions with just that.

The system giving him servants(or followers, whatever you want to call them) who is subservient to him is somewhat insulting.The sect leader lady completely lost her personality.I feel like that three potentially strong female characters just devolved onto mindless followers... That being said I did like the outline of the story although it dis feel astonishingly similarly to a novel I have read before. But I am reserving judgement since I have read only 72 chapters. I did think it would have been better for him to just sell wine since he is an aspiring? wine God but this is good too. Also I feel like the villains are too idiotic and don't have any good information network to understand they are horribly outclassed. I wish they could be a bit more fleshed out and intelligent. There are a lot of cliches and overused plot themes. Hair trigger cannon fodder villains, arrogant females who gets  swayed by his looks or power, rich scions who gets won over by the amazing food and wine, greedy experts who wants to snatch MC's possessions, an astonished mob......

This is one of the best novel i had ever read, definitely recommend this. it is a slow and calm story, i like how there's not really a life threatening or another side character that has the system. it has a well balanced between problems and lay ways. Overall 4.4 ? ?

I am enjoying this tale for its creative use of pop culture and ancient mythos. The main characters are developing nicely and the plot moves on without becoming stale.

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to all those who are still on the fence thinking if they should start with this novel or not, trust me give it a go. With just 4 chaps you will be hooked. The story has alot of potential to cross atleast 500 chaps with the beautiful world building and the best part is that the author is not rushing the story or making the MC too op right off the bat. The MC is op but not like crazy world destroying at 5 years of age op. Regarding the MC not acting as a demon lord, what do you expect, MC was a demon lord in this previous life but that dosent mean he has to be a ruthless bloodthirsty killer that kills everyone within sight. Author if you can just concentrate on he human continent ark for some time and then venture into the other continents, it will be an awesome novel. Thanks for your efforts, i very much enjoying it.