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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
So far this story draws you into the world its played off in, the author succeeds in making you feel the surroundings just as the protagonist does.Apart from a few spelling mistakes here and there it still gets you gripped to the story, and whats happening so far doesn't give you any indication of what might happen, although there's a scene in the first chapter that gives you an idea of what to expect, war is no childsplay.Another thing the author did was bring in a person from a foreign country to serve with the US Army, this is a reality as many foreigners do this to support their families back home, and hopefully through this novel, one might get an idea what these men go through to do so.In only two chapters i started liking it, and am curious to see what happens.
Great work, I'm eager to see how this story will develop! The kingdom building and action parts are quite balanced, and the protagonist isn't a scaredy cat. It seems like the relationship between the two universes is not forgotten, and we can await other invaders from the original universe sometime later. Keep up the good work!
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I tried my hardest to keep on reading this story, but I just can't continue. All the author does it make comments about what happen to him at the website he release his story originally and not the story. I have left a few comments on some of the chapters, they weren't rude or over the top, just some thought on it. The author responded, instead giving a normal response to my comment, he told me to stop reading it, he was very defensive. I can understand from his story and comments response, he did not have a great time where he first release his story. People over their was beyond rude and would make anyone very upset, but my comments where nothing like that. Author if you spent more time on writing your story, ignored really hateful people, your stories would be better, but you seem that you like to bathe in those comments and never let it go. I hope in the future you can get past your experience before you came to Webnovel and be able to write great stories.
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All i got to say is W author and Chapter 3 paragraph 31. Rest is for word count. Rest is for word count. Rest is for word count. Rest is for word count.
Its annoying, author doesn't use proper grammar, doesn't know how to use words correctly, and doesn't know how to add periods at the end of paragraphs.
It's a fresh start! The wait was worth it!!Thank you author for listening to reviews and starting from the scratch.It's always hard to rewrite anything with new ideas but you mad lad did.This time the character looks like having some essence, a desire for revenge, to fulfill his dreams. Doesn't looks like a Beta mc, has a cat as per, is on the dark side and we got lemons hehe ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), what's more than that you want??Yes it's only been 7 chaps but that enough has made a statement that we could expect more from the author.
Pretty good read and very refreshing compared to the usual roster of Same old system novel that are generic and and bad (Few are good) - this is pretty good but idk if its gonna get picked
This is a good novel with something different that is mc has cultivation materials with him and does not have mindless sex and the plot is simple to understand and has quiet a lot of potential to evolve into better plot in future I as vivad HAREM novel reader can Say give it a try atleast even if u don't like it won't be a waste of ur time