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The story is made in a fresh and grips you from the start. The main character is like an everyday man but becomes more and more like a badass. If you have ever wandered what it is to have superpowers one day, it is a good way to see what it will be for a normal Joe to become a hero in his own story. The comedy is very friendly and can be a game changer in serious situations. But you can find it offensive(but for me it isn't :).I found the harem aspect very funny and in a not so intrusive sense to come out of nowhere. This is going to rock your boat in a lot of ways(like *** scenes :D who doesn't love those :D a lot of *** and even jokes about ***)But in all seriousness it is interesting and for a lot of smart people will be something to enjoy and rely, RELY give you a look of what you will be if you could have a antihero/almost hero.

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Firstly, I really appreciate translators work. Good job, well done!Now novel is good, not really awesome or anything, it's just solid good novel. With steady MC methodically destroying his counterpart. MC is smart, and circumstances are forcing him to act bad, and so bad stuff. recommend to light reading.

What? This is the newest book written by the author of both “Spare Me, Great Lord” and “The First Order”?! What? You’re saying that this is currently one of the most popular books on qidian.com? What? You’re telling me that I should support this so that it would get picked? What nonsense are you saying? Ain’t that common sense? Come on! Support it with me!

Over all the story is amazing. The author could definitely improve on world development, but the story line and character development is on point. A great book so would definitely recommend.

I am not really good at writing reviews so please bear with me.This story is slow-paced but for me it's good because it shows different influences of different views to a child that stubbornly holds on the beliefs instilled into him by his companions as a growing child. On how he deal with the obstacles and what does he firmly believe in. In their world, decisions are important but it should also align with his beliefs as it may cause repercussions to his foundation.He is extremely decisive and that's what I like about Hei. If he resolve to do something, he will do his best to accomplish it.I wish that the author can continue writing more exciting chapters. ???? Thank you!!!???

I looked for something exactly like this and was so happy that you wrote this. This is a great novel, thank you author.

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The best part of this novel is its quick flow.Many readers and reviewers have already commented on the lack of Scientific or even Pseudo-Scientific  knowledge displayed by the author.The lack is quite glaring, and difficult to ignore. Exceptional perseverance is needed to gloss over the nonsensical 'Scientific' bits.World building should be viewed with astigmatic lenses. Too much focus would highlight the obvious mismatched and illogical details....So yes! The novel isn't much, but it can be enjoyed by lightly reading without too much emphasis on details. So the quick flow pacing of the plotlines and 'actions' is a major plus for this novel.

Vraiment très mal écrit. Besoin d'un éditeur!                                                                                       

The story starts as a high martial arts story but takes an about turn into low xianxia fantasy with no rhyme or reason. The plot is pretty much non existent and the cultivation levels of the characters are all over the place. It is shown that the MC is pretty much a never before seen genius by becoming a half step grandmaster at his age but in just 5-10 chapters every one of his generation he meets are grandmasters. Pretty nonsensical. Changing the MC name to Victor is also a stupid decision. It sounds awkward when everyone has Chinese names and only he has a western name. Overall skip this trash and save yourself some time.

this has been my fav. novel in this genre for a long time. It has a lot of things i love about it but restrain myself and write about a few here. first the theme. there are hundreds of wuxia novels coming out every year, but most just feel like a wish fulfilment or just not practical. like a random guy just walks to a king and badmouths him. now how in the world is that practical in this world? this novel has the most authentic feel to it. then there are the characters. good i love these characters. again most novels could replace their characters with 2d figures but we wont feel a thing. but not this one.  the feel like real people that live in an old chinese feudal lord system world. the characters dont feel and act like petty teenagers throughout their lives. then the story itself. it uses a lot of cliches. not gonna lie. but it uses them is such a good manner that its a plus. it made me second guess, triple guess every single little thing even after it was confirmed which in other novels would have been obvious from the start. this is what made me keep reading the story.lastly the depth and philosophy. some people criticise it for it. they call it flowery language and nothing else. i'd say it re-sparked my love for poetry. for some 400-500 chapters straight it had 1-3 mentions/ references from famous ancient chinese poems and literature. sometimes it indeed went a bit too far in it but in other parts it dropped some poster worthy lines and different takes on matters that you usually dont often see(well again some criticise it for doing this saying it makes it needlessly complicated or that its not an original thought. well, I don't expect a single author to come up with all of that in the first place. whats presented to us is a bit from all over the Chinese history and philosophy and not being read in the Chinese classics it was still somewhat new to me and i guess for a lot of other readers). another thing to add, it sometimes just doesn't lay out the facts verbose and you actually have to understand what you are reading. like, after talking to a lot of people in the comments and forms i realised a lot of them didnt even realise when they(the mc and female lead) had ***. other novels hipe it up so much and here it wasn't even directly mentioned, just a casual 1-2 liner remark that didn't even say it directly. then there is the rant about the female lead being a *****. i mean comeon? is see? seriously? no. the family did go overboard(but by wuxia standards not overboard at all) but the female lead even made sacrifices for his sake when she practically didn't even know him! just to uphold his honour(btw for what reason? just cuz her grandfather in his senile years gifted her as a symbol of gratitude?) she went against her own sect and people who she considered her brothers. she was THE freaking princess of the most powerful nation goddammit. and she still did all those things cuz she felt she owed him that much( whether she did or not i know for certain i wouldn't be able to go through with it).